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This
is your lucky day because I
have created for you what I
think is one of the most
compelling interviews on my
site. It's with Brian Keith
Voiles. Brian is the
one of the world's
greatest
copywriter and in the
next two and one half hours
you'll know why.
In this first time tell all
interview you'll learn how
Brian Keith Voiles would
come home dripping wet with
sweat every day in overalls
from stacking bricks for a
living to becoming one the
world’s greatest living copywriters.
Brian's ad
writing techniques work –
and his track record of
"top-dog" clients speaks for
itself. Brian has written
for:
Ted
Nicholas,
author of "How To Form
Your Own Corporation For
Under $75"
Gary Halbert,
author of "How To Make
Maximum Money In Minimum
Time"
Jay
Abraham,
marketing consultant
and author
Robert Allen,
Best-selling author of
"No Money Down Real
Estate "
You'll
be super-glued to your seat
as you hear in Brian's own
voice ....
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How
Amway was the pivotal
turning point in his
thinking even though he
never made a dime in the
MLM business.
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You'll be amazed at to
hear how Brian describes
in detail how he was
making $3200 a month
working only three hours a
day as a part-time
janitor.
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Learn what Brian did to
support his wife and three
young boys in the early
days living in a rented
trailer
home.
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You'll chuckle when you
hear about the make and
model of the nicest car
Brian ever owned.
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Get inside Brian's head as
he describes what guided
him to being a copywriter
heavyweight.
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Hear his personal story of
how a five dollar magic
set changed the direction
of his life and turned him
into one of the best
copywriters on the planet.
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$90,000 in 90 days, learn
how a chance chain letter
started a sequence of
events that would
introduce Brian to the
world of copywriting.
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Feast your ears on the
story about one letter
that was pulling right
about 36% and getting
phenomenal results and
learn how to get it for your
own swipe file.
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Hear Brian's true story of how he
survived a deadly softball
size brain tumor in the
middle of his head.
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Hear exactly how Brian
sold 3000 copywriting
courses on his first major
direct mail campaign.
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Hear
why Brian thinks going
offline with your product
may be the best way to
rake in big money with
your product of service.
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Learn why Brian cuts and
tapes hundreds of
headlines to his wall
before he picks “the one”
for his client’s sales letter.
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Learn how if your loaded
with great testimonials
and a risk free
proposition, you can sell
anything with the write
copywriting skills.
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Hear what Brian does first
before he writes one word of
copy in
any letter.
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Learn who to talk to in
your research phase and
who to record twice..
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Learn why recording your
conversations will get you
mouth watering sales copy.
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You’ll hear specific
results and success
stories Brian has
generated for world-class
marketers like Jay
Abraham, Gary Halbert, Ted
Nicholas, Yanik Silver and
more.
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Hear what to do when a
client gets too lazy to
mail your letter.
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Learn one legal clause to
place in your contract to
protect you before you
write one word of copy for
a client.
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Learn Brian's secret for generating
headlines that smash
controls and how to get
them to pop into your
subconscious at will.
Oh and one more thing. For
all of you who don't believe
in the power of a great
sales letter, I have
included proof that what
Brian teaches works. The
last recording is the story
of Kyle from San Diego. Kyle
is 21 years old and ordered
Brian's Ad Magic course. He
used one letter from the
course and booked $4000 in
orders. So what you say?
Kyle only mailed 28 letters.
His cost for the mailing was
less then $15.00.
Anyway, the bonus recording
is all there for you to hear
now. It's only about 15
minutes. More proof that if
you have the guts to just do
it, you can open your world
to new opportunities beyond
your wildest dreams. Go for
it. If you
have any questions for Brian
or you would like consider
and copywriting project, you
may
e-mail him
Michael Senoff Interviews
Brian Keith Voiles Vol. 1
Brian: I can sell anything. The
truth is, I can sell anything
that I—first of all, I have to
want to sell it; I have to
believe in it. Second of all, if
they’ve got testimonials that
are decent, they don’t even have
to be great and if they a risk
free proposition, I can sell
anything. Guaranteed, I can sell
anything.
[MUSIC]
Brian: I hate calling anything
that I do a gift because I have
worked hard to master everything
I have mastered. But I do think
there was a piece of me that was
to be a writer. My grandmother
was a writer and she was a
copywriter, too. She wrote radio
commercials. Michael, if I had
to sum in a nutshell what’s
unique about Brian and in my
copywriting is this deep
compassionate empathy that’s
truly heart felt for other
people. And I think that’s what
I took away from the brain tumor
experience.
Michael: Had you ever had a job
working for somebody?
Brian: Yes, I did. I had two
jobs before that. One was in my
teenaged years. I worked at a
Mexican restaurant.
Michael: Bussing tables,
cooking, what?
Brian: I was called a disher. I
would take the food, put it on
the plate, make it look pretty,
and the people would eat it. But
there was a little bit of
cooking involved, but no
recipes. It was just fry the
taco.
Michael: How long were you at
that job, the Mexican food one?
Brian: Six years. I started when
I was 13.
Michael: That’s a long time.
Brian: Yes, I worked hard. All
my other friends were out
playing for the most part and
they were all pretty rich. I
come from a real poor, country
background. I grew up in the
back woods of Okalahoma. We just
never had much. For me to get a
five-dollar magic set for
Christmas was a dream come true.
Michael: How many brothers and
sisters do you have?
Brian: I had one older brother
that beat the holy living crap
out of me all the time.
Michael: I’m sorry to hear that.
Brian: It’s funny now, but it
wasn’t fun at the time. My dad
basically ignored me and my mom
was sweet, but she was always in
a lot of emotional pain. It was
just kind of…I’m not here to
whine, just rough. My mom and
day divorces. I think I was 11
or so. A year and a half later,
my mom moved out here to Utah
just on a whim.
Michael: Take the boys with her?
Brian: She took me with her and
my older brother was really…he
was just angry at the world,
angry at everything. He stayed
there and he actually was
renting a house on his own and
he was about 16, 17 years old.
But anyway, I worked real hard
to try to have some money. And
then I got a really great
experience. I served as a
missionary for the Mormon Church
over in Japan.
Michael: Really? How did you get
that deal?
Brian: Well, you know, it’s a
choice you make. When you’re 19,
it’s not a requirement. It’s up
to you whether or not you go on
a mission and if you do, they’ll
support you.
Michael: So, did you move out to
Japan at 19?
Brian: Yes, I went to Japan and
lived there for 18 months.
Michael: Were you with other
guys doing the same thing?
Brian: Yes.
Michael: Was it fun?
Brian: It was. It was more fun
than anything. It was more fun
that it was missionary work…for
me, anyway.
Michael: Now were you Mormon?
Brian: Yes.
Michael: So, is that the guy you
see like they go out two by two
on bicycles in the white shirts
and kind of…
Brian: That’s right.
Michael: You were doing that in
Japan?
Brian: Yes. And they have a
language training center in
Provo, Utah where you spend
about six weeks doing your best
to learn the language. And
Japanese is not the simplest
language, and the six weeks
isn’t the longest amount of time
you need. But what they found is
they just throw you into it and
you just tend to pick it up
after about or four or five
months once you understand the
fundamentals and you keep
studying your vocabulary. You
look up words as people say them
if you don’t understand them.
It’s a great experience. It was
really wonderful. To this day, I
cherish those memories. I
absolutely love Japanese food.
Michael: So, you came back and
you were 20 1/2. And then did
you come right back to Utah?
Brian: Yes, I came back and met
a gal and got married right
away—probably too soon. But,
hey, we fell in love and I fell
head over heels and we got
married.
Michael: When you got married,
what was your financial
situation?
Brian: We lived in a mobile
home. We had just shopped around
for apartments and we just
couldn’t see dumping money into
something like that where the
money’s just going down the
drain. And so, somehow or other,
we came up with the idea, well
let’s find a mobile home. And we
did, and we found an inexpensive
mobile home park to put it in.
And we did that. I got a job at
Interstate Brick. And what I
did, along with about six other
guys, all day long was take
brick off the kiln cars and
stack them onto pallets.
Michael: Wow. And they were a
brick manufacturer?
Brian: Yes.
Michael: So, these were like hot
bricks coming out of the oven?
Brian: Exactly. Yes, and
sometimes they were definitely
were hot.
Michael: And how long did you do
that for?
Brian: Let’s see I started in
probably in ’83 and I quit in
April of ’87.
Michael: What kind of money did
that pay?
Brian: They paid some piecework
rate, but it was the base of
$6.50 an hour. And the piecework
allowed me to usually make about
$100 a day. But at the same
time, first of all, I just knew
I didn’t belong there. It just
wasn’t the space for me. But I
had a family to support. A
friend of mine had introduced me
to Amway. Now, I’m bringing this
up. Amway was the pivotal
turning point in my thinking.
Michael: Who introduced you to
Amway?
Brian: A high school friend of
mine. Here’s what appealed to me
most Michael. They said that I
could work 20 hours a week and
make $5,000 a month. And that
meant if I only had to work 20
hours a week to make $5,000 a
month, I’m financially free. In
my mind…please understand, I’m
22, 23 years old making $6.50 an
hour; $5,000 seemed like a
goldmine. And I only had to work
20 hours a week to do it. That
is what sold me on doing it. And
number two was the chance to get
out the brickyard and to be my
own boss and run my own show and
make residual, permanent income
working 20 hours a week for
$5,000 a month.
Michael: I bet you couldn’t
sleep that night.
Brian: I was so excited; I
couldn’t believe it. I went out
over the next year and I
personally sponsored 36
people—two down-line legs—that I
had driven down about six levels
deep. But more importantly, I
was listening to the Worldwide
Dream Builders tape. There’s a
gentleman by the name Bill
Britt. I think Bill Britt
started the Worldwide Dream
Builders Association. And
anyway, it was like a tape of
the week club and there were all
these Amway, successful Amway
people telling their story on
these tapes and how they do the
business, etc. And I would go to
work with a tape player and a
headphone and I would listen to
those tapes over and over, all
day long. I was getting sales
training over and over, all day
long. I was getting inspiration
over and over, all day long. And
it just made my days slide by.
It was wonderful. You know, I
never made a dime in the Amway
and the key mistake I made is I
didn’t sponsor people who were
at my ambition level or above. I
sponsored people who were easy
to sponsor because they were so
inspired by my enthusiasm that
they just lined up. But they had
no drive or ambition of their
own. That was one of the
principles of the training that
they taught. Sponsor at your
ambition level or above, which
is really a brilliant concept
when it comes to network
marketing because if you’re
sponsoring people as ambition as
you are; well, if you’re
ambitious then you know you’re
going to have success. But more
importantly, I thank God for
Amway because I would not have
started down this path of
working for myself. I wouldn’t
even have occurred to me that I
could be a business owner. I
didn’t picture me ever being a
business owner at that age. I
had no clue what I was doing. I
was just having a family and
paying the bills. I mean we were
happy. I mean we were happy, we
weren’t rolling in the dough,
but we had a lot of joy in our
little home; a lot of happy
memories in my life comes from
that time period. And I worked
hard. I came home dripping wet
with sweat ever day in my
overalls. But, those are some of
the really treasured memories.
One thing, when I was working at
the brickyard, a friend
approached me—a different
friend—and he said, hey Brian,
you know what. I’ve been
cleaning carpets. I got this
carpet cleaning machine and
people have been paying me to
clean some carpets. Do you want
to come out on some jobs? I’ll
pay you $10 an hour. I was like,
wow, okay. So, I went out on
some jobs with him in the
evening and did some carpet
cleaning. He paid me $10 an
hour. And we did that…it wasn’t
very often, maybe a couple of
times a month. We did that on
and off for like six months.
Then six months into it he goes
hey Brian, you know, I’ve got
these office building that I’m
cleaning these carpets for, but
they also asked me if I could
like empty the trash and clean
off the desks and vacuum and
things like that. So, we started
up a little janitorial service.
We got too many people; too many
clients, do you want to take
over…I’ll pay you $12 an hour to
go at night and clean this place
and that place. I was like yes
I’ll do that. And so, I went and
he trained me and showed me what
to do with this office and don’t
do this at that office. It’s
just whatever the people wanted
is what we did. And they were
pretty big buildings. None of
them were just little onesy,
twosy; like an accountant’s
office or something like that.
And I got thinking about it and
I thought…well, I didn’t
consciously think this, but I
had all this sales training from
Amway. I thought about it and
thought I bet I could go out and
bet you anything I could get
some of these deals for myself.
And so, I asked my buddy if it
was all right with him and he’s
like, yes, sure, go for it. So,
I did. I took one of the busiest
streets in Salt Lake Valley. And
I’m so proud of this Michael.
I’ve got to…I am so proud of
this. I had some business cards.
I printed up 1,000 business
cards for $15, Voiles Cleaning
Service, it said on there. Put
my wife’s name on there and put
my name on there. And I went to
33rd South and 3rd West. I went
all the way up to 23rd East.
Now, we’re talking probably five
miles, maybe eight miles. I
walked on the north side of 33rd
South and I knocked on every
stinking door there was to knock
on. Went in, suit and tie,
introduced myself and said, who
is in charge of your janitorial
service? And I tell you; I went
up the north side, crossed the
street, after eight miles of
door knocking, went down the
south side, eight miles of door
knocking. It took me about three
and a half weeks to do this, and
by the time I was done, I had
$3,200 worth of janitorial
services; little teeny offices
that all the big companies
wouldn’t even touch. Little
teeny offices that were happy to
pay me, oh yes, we need it so
bad. The bathroom and we hate
taking out the garbage and
everything. I had $3,200 and
they were all like little $60 a
month deals.
Michael: That was $3,200 a
month.
Brian: Yes, and my biggest job
was $120 a month. Man, I
couldn’t believe I had landed a
$120 a month job.
Michael: That’s great, and it’s
a residual, too.
Brian: Yes, and most of them
were once a week. And so, I said
well, do you mind if I come on a
Tuesday night instead of on the
weekend? And what I did is I got
them all…they were all happy
just to have me come. I had my
whole week divided up. And what
I did is I got up at 4:30-5:00
in the morning and I would go
and I would clean the offices
for that day and I was home by
seven in time to help with
breakfast and getting the kids
off to school. So, I was working
two and a half, maybe three
hours every early morning doing
janitorial. And I came home. And
you know what, I was free the
rest of the day.
Michael: That’s great.
Brian: Yes. Oh part of the story
was, I got laid off. I got laid
off about four months after I
started this janitorial thing.
Michael: From the brick place?
Brian: Yes, the brick place had
laid me off and they offered me
the job back later, but I said
no thank you. So anyway, they
were really great. They paid
their unemployment and they were
a good company.
Michael: Do a comparison; the
brick laying with your hard
labor; how much were making a
month and then let’s compare it
to what you had going with your
own business.
Brian: Oh, I was really happy to
make $2,000 or $2,200 month in
brick laying.
Michael: And that was from what
time to what time?
Brian: I started at seven, so I
had to leave at 6:30 and the
work ended at 3:30.
Michael: And then the janitorial
work, you were doing two and
half hours in the morning…
Brian: Yes.
Michael: …and you were making
around $3,200 a month?
Brian: Yes. Well now, on the
weekends, I would have to put in
a good three hours, maybe
four—just on Saturday. I never
worked Sunday.
Michael: And you got that all
from hustling?
Brian: Yes. It was just a no
brainer. When I look at it now,
I just think well anybody can do
that. Just pick a busy street
and look for these little
businesses that the big boys
aren’t even going to go after.
Don’t worry about window
cleaning. I just did the basic
stuff people didn’t want to do.
They didn’t want to take out the
garbage. They didn’t want to
clean the toilet. They didn’t
want to scrub the bathroom
floor. They didn’t want to
vacuum. They didn’t want to
dust. And you know what, that’s
all I ever did—common, ordinary
housekeeping stuff that took no
specialized training whatsoever.
It was just no brainer stuff.
Guess what…people don’t want to
do it.
Michael: So, how long did you do
the janitorial stuff?
Brian: I did that for…I was
still doing it when I started my
copywriting. What I realized
after doing the janitorial for a
month or two, I’ve got the rest
of the day and I can’t handle
any more janitorial work unless
I want to start getting into
employees and stuff like that.
That was something in Amway that
they shunned because they tell
you; you don’t need employees.
You don’t want employees because
then you become a salve to the
business. And so, that was
something I knew I wanted to
stay away from. So, I thought,
okay we’re clipping along here
pretty good. I got the trailer
paid off. Bought a new car for
my wife. A Honda Accel. It
really was the nicest car I had
ever owned. And I thought, well
okay what am I going to do. And
my wife one day said, well
didn’t you make money with your
magic before doing magic shows?
I said well yes, I did five or
six shows and made some money.
She says, well why don’t you do
that during the day. I’m like
who is going to hire a magician
during the day. And then it
occurred to me that the
elementary schools would. So, I
just wasn’t afraid to get on the
phone, Michael, because I did it
with Amway. And I just got on
the phone and I started calling
daycare centers. I started
calling, actually the elementary
schools. I dressed up in a suit
and a tie and I went to every
elementary school in the Salt
Lake Valley. Something…any
professional magician would be
either too elitist about…too
good to do, or they’re just too
freaking lazy, which most people
are. I went to every school. And
by the time I was done, I had
gone to like 40 schools and out
of 40 schools, I had booked like
18 shows. Admittedly, I wasn’t
charging much because I didn’t
know what to charge. I’d charge
$50 for most of them and then
later on as I was seeing
success, maybe I should charge
more. And it wasn’t a matter of
market thinking. I wasn’t
thinking about the market or
marketing at all. I was just
thinking well maybe I could get
more money. I wasn’t thinking
what the demand was or what the
competition was charging. It was
just a matter of hey maybe I
could get more. So I just
decided…I charged a few of those
$85. I thought, man I’m
making…I’m going to go to the
school, I’m going to spend a
half hour; I’m going to get $50
or $85. Do you know how much
that is an hour? Holy crap,
that’s $170 and hour. I was so
excited I couldn’t stand it.
Michael: That’s great. And had
you practiced magic when you
were younger?
Brian: Oh yes. I friend gave me
a magic kit when I was ten and
from that point on, man, I was
just hooked on magic; still am
to this day. I don’t do shows
anymore. When I speak at a
seminar, I almost always do
magic, but I’ll still buy the
latest videos and some of the
newest tricks and things like
that. It’s just that addiction.
Where I’m leading, though, is
the magic is ultimately—I mean
Amway was the paradox shift for
me. It just changed everything
from having a job to just—I had
this programmed drive to be
self-employed and that was the
crux of everything that guided
me to where I am. And then magic
is what turned me on to
marketing because I just wanted
to succeed at it. And I thought
how can I get more business? I
just need more business. Again,
I wasn’t afraid to get on the
phone, but I was getting too
many shows that was taking up
phone time. So, I couldn’t be on
the phone because you could only
phone during certain hours. And
if I’m not doing shows during
those hours, guess what…can’t be
on the phone generating
business. So, I thought maybe
I’ll advertise. Well, actually
what made me think of that was
from the pre-school shows I was
getting birthday parties. Mom’s
would call and say hi, my son
saw you today and he just loved
you. He said you were hilarious
and do you do birthday parties?
And, of course, I wasn’t going
to say no, even though I’d never
done one. And so, I said sure, I
can do birthday parties. So,
that’s what got me thinking well
gee maybe there are other people
out there that would like to
have magician at their birthday.
See, I’d never even heard of
that. I’d never even heard of
that…of having a magic show at
your birthday party. I was
really naïve about life in
general. So anyway, I thought
well maybe I’ll advertise, but
where can I advertise for
pre-schools. There’s nowhere. I
can’t advertise for elementary
schools. I don’t know what to
do. And I thought, well I’ll
just advertise for birthday
parties. This is really the key
turning point for me. There’s an
advertising newspaper here in
town called The Mailbox
Shopper—really nice. It’s a good
publication. People do get
results from it now. It was a
lot younger when I looked at it,
but anyway, I had the guy come
out—the owner—and he was selling
me on this ad. And I said, well
okay, I’ll think about it. But
you know, I don’t know what to
say in my ad. And he goes here’s
some examples. And he shows me
what everyone else is doing;
here’s the name of the
restaurant and they’ve got a
little coupon here, buy one get
one half off and their address
and their phone number. So, I
just thought, okay well I’ll do
an ad that says magic shows. Put
my phone number in there. Well,
ultimately, I spent hours on
this ad and I was so confused
about what to do, what to do. I
went to the Yellow Pages and
looked at all the ads in there.
And I looked at all the ads in
all Mailbox Shoppers I could get
my hands on. I even called
several of the advertisers in
Mailbox Shopper; hey does this
thing work for you. Well, you
know, sometimes it does,
sometimes it doesn’t. That was
just such a confusing deal for
me. Ultimately, I decided not to
do, but then the guy said, well
how about this, how about if I
let run this ad for half off and
you come and do a magic show for
my church. I was like okay, wow,
there’s a deal. And so I did it.
I did get two birthday parties
out of the ad.
Michael: Do you remember how
much the ad was for?
Brian: It couldn’t have been
more than $100 because I was a
tightwad. I wouldn’t have spent
more than $100 on it. That’s two
whole magic shows. That was my
mindset at the time. I got two
parties out of it, but I thought
about it. Now, this is the one
brilliant thing I did. I
thought, now wait a minute, I
spent $225 on this ad and I only
got two birthday parties.
Wow…that wasn’t a very good deal
even though I had paid for half
of my ad with a magic show. It
still wasn’t a very good deal.
That’s how I looked at it. I
didn’t say I didn’t break even.
And so, I just didn’t know what
to do. Now, here’s what
happened. This is fun to even
think about for me. My wife and
I did this chain letter thing.
You’ve probably seen it—$90,000
in 90 days. We decided, oh let’s
just give this a try. And so we
rented a mailing list of
opportunity seekers for $15 for
a thousand. So, we mailed out
all these chain letters and, of
course, it was just dismal what
happened. But what it did is it
got my name on same mailing
lists. I’ll be ever grateful for
that doggoned chain letter. So,
here comes this newsprint
magazine chucked full of…
Michael: Money making
opportunities?
Brian: And I was paging through
that sucker. I saw an ad and it
said, make more money in your
business. Learn how to advertise
and get results. Learn how to
mail and get results. I was just
blown away. I spoke to me,
Michael, it really did. And it
was an ad by Jeffrey Lant for
his Money Making Marketing book.
Michael: Wow.
Brian: And right underneath it
was an ad that spoke to me just
as well for his Cash Copy book,
and if you buy them both
together, you save $10. So, I
bit the bullet and I told my
wife, I said honey—I went to her
with everything, she controlled
the money—and I said I have got
to get these. I really think I
can do something with my magic
business if I get these books.
So, we did; we got them. And I
did not put those books down
except to go do a magic show and
go do my cleaning route. And I
studied them. I devoured them. I
took notes. I mapped out a
marketing plan. I didn’t even
know about direct mail—oh wow
what a cool idea—except for our
chain letters. I was oh that’s a
neat…I could do a postcard. Oh
that’s cool. I should just send
a postcard instead of knocking
on all these doors or phoning
all these places. I could mail
them a letter. Wow, what a
concept. But for me, this was
amazing. And those books really
are good. They’re two of his
finer work and the other books,
I really love his How To Make A
Million Dollars Publishing,
Commissioning, and Writing How
To Information. That’s the best,
in my opinion, step by step how
to create an information product
book on the planet. In fact,
I’ve got a funny little side
story. I had bought…well this
was a few years later…but I had
bought Ted Nicholas’ how to
publish how to book. I don’t
remember what he called it.
Michael: How To Publish A Book
and Sell A Million Copies?
Brian: Yes, that was it. I had
bought that and it was expensive
and love Ted. This is before I’d
gotten to know him. But it was
just terrible compared to
Jeffrey Lant’s book. Jeffrey
Lant was so precise and detailed
in every little step. And I
actually wrote…I sent Ted’s
product back, and I actually
wrote him a letter that said;
hey I’m sorry I had to ask for a
refund. But this just isn’t
really very good. I don’t know
if you know about this work by
Jeffrey Lant, but it’s called
How To Make A…blah, blah, blah.
I said you really ought to check
it out because it’s a lot better
than yours.
Michael: That’s hilarious.
Brian: I said that to Ted
Nicholas. Well, anyway, I mean
really, Michael, I hardly slept
for two weeks, and those books
are thick. They are copy dense
and they took a while to read
and understand. I ended up
buying every single thing I
could from that guy.
Michael: That’s exactly what you
needed. You had the answers in
front of you in those books for
your magic business. And did you
start applying them to your
magic business?
Brian: Oh, did I ever. One thing
led to another. I got introduced
to this guy—I don’t even
remember how I found this…it
must have been on some magic
list and they rented my name or
something. There’s a gentleman
by the name of Brian Flora in
Albuquerque, New Mexico and he
has since passed away. Bless his
heart. He had his second heart
attack. He was pretty young. He
put on this annual conference
for magicians on how to market
your business. And somehow I got
an invitation to it. I was just
bouncing off the walls with
excitement to go. Before that, I
had already been having success
from using the Jeffrey Lant
stuff. And what I was doing, I
was just mailing elementary
schools and the pre-schools. And
I was having really good success
with it. I believe in gifts, but
I hate to call anything that I
do a gift because I have worked
hard to master everything I have
mastered. But I do think there
was piece of me that was to be a
writer. I wrote stories as a
little boy. I wrote stories
about the Cherry family—I called
them. And I had poems and
things. My grandmother was a
writer and she was a copywriter,
too. She wrote radio
commercials. Iva Simpson is her
name and she…believe it or not
Michael; this is so cool to
tell. She was the lady that came
up with word scrump-dilly-icious
for Dairy Queen.
Michael: She was writing radio
commercials during what year?
Back in the 30s or 20s?
Brian: Oh yes, 30s and 40s,
probably into the 50s.
Michael: Where was she living?
Brian: Back woods Oklahoma,
Miami, Oklahoma.
Michael: That’s interesting. I
had a guy on my list who just
sent me…he was so gracious for
all the audio recordings I had
on my site…and he just sent me
the CD of all these old radio
commercials from the 1920s and
1930s.
Brian: No way.
Michael: I swear. Just last week
and I’m going to put them all up
on my
www.hardtofindads.com
site. They’re public
domain. And you’ve got Puff
Grain and Wheatberry; the same
concept that Claude Hopkins
wrote. And I was reading some
research in a book called, Taken
At The Flood. It’s the story of
Albert Lasker with Lord &
Thomas. That’s who Claude
Hopkins worked for. And Albert
Lasker…he wasn’t real sold on
radio until he was introduced to
it by a friend of his, and he
saw Pepsodent sales, which was
one of their accounts triple by
sponsoring it with some of the
soap operas that they had on the
early radio stations. And he
ended up owning and bought
almost 30% of all the radio
during that time. Lord & Thomas
was one of the largest
advertising agencies next to Jay
Walter Thompson. They had Quaker
Oats. They had…I’d have to look
at this list, which are some of
the companies Hopkins developed
when he was working with Lord &
Thomas. And some of these radio
commercials match the same
written campaigns that Hopkins
established when he was working
for Lord & Thomas. It’s
fascinating. And to listen…
Brian: Yes, it is fascinating.
Michael: They’re all going to be
up on that
www.hardtofindads.com
site for everyone to
listen to. You’re so creative. I
think your child-like and you’ve
got that great imagination. The
imagination is a gift.
Brian: Well, I work hard at it.
Michael: But you know how to
channel it. You know what to do
with it. Let’s continue.
Brian: All right. So, I was
mailing these letters. I was
getting good results, and I
didn’t look at it in terms of
percentages or anything. I just
knew that if mailed out 100
letters to 100 different
pre-schools that I was going to
book 15 or 16 shows. That’s the
only way I looked at it. Some of
this just occurred to me
logically, you know what, I
mailed them a month ago, but
they didn’t call me back. I
think I’ll just send them
another letter and say hey
what’s the deal. I didn’t hear
back from you. I’ve got a spring
special going on. And I thought
you guys would jump all over
this, but you didn’t. And you
really ought to take advantage
of it. Look at some of the
quotes I got from some of these
other pre-schools.
Michael: And so, what happened
when you mailed them again?
Brian: On any mailing that I
would do again, I’d get another
10 shows like that. It was
just…well, part of it was
naturally, but then there was
the lesson I learned from
Jeffrey Lant was you’ve got to
follow up seven times with these
people; seven times is ideal. I
didn’t just naturally occur to
me, but the way I thought about
it wasn’t from a marketing point
of view other than seven times.
All I knew is I’ve got to
contact them at least seven
times before I take them off the
list.
Michael: Did you do all seven?
Brian: Oh yes. I mailed them
seven times.
Michael: So, give me an idea.
The first maybe pull in how many
shows, second time, third time,
fourth time, fifth time, sixth
time…just to give me an idea
from your experience just for
the magic shows?
Brian: Well, the magic business
is a wonderful thing because if
a pre-school likes you, they’ve
had you and they like you and
they get a letter in the mail
two months later…guess
what…they’ll just call you and
book you again because they have
bad magicians come in—oh gee
that was horrible. And they’re
hesitant to hire another
magician. But then once they saw
me, they’re like oh that was
awesome, that was great. And
they were happy to have me back,
but I needed to contact them.
Sometimes they would call me and
say yes, we have this special
fair going on. Do you want to
come and put on a show? But very
rarely would people just call
out of the blue in the beginning
and schedule a show. I just did
what Jeffrey Lant said. I just
did it. I put it into action.
And then anyway, I had this
other magician friend in Atlanta
that I had met. His name is John
Cooper. He told me about this
idea…well, actually before that,
I’m giving you all the scoop.
I’m just filling you in on all
the details. Somehow I had met
John when he was in Atlanta and
he was a children’s entertainer
and magician, too. And he said
you know, Brian, I’ve been
thinking about starting a fan
club. I’m like oh come on, John.
Fan clubs are for TV stars and
fan clubs are for rock stars.
They’re not for magicians like
mucked magicians like me and
you. He said, oh no, I’m really
thinking about doing it. And so,
we both put our thinking caps
together. Well anyway, he ended
up coming out with a product
called How To Build Your
Birthday Business. And it was
six months later and I heard
about this product. And I said,
now wait a minute. Is that the
same John Cooper? And it was.
What he had done, he had come up
with this idea of doing a fan
club and he started selling it
to other magicians. And I’m sure
it wasn’t much of an income
stream for him at the time. So,
I called him up and said, hey
dude, you’re doing that fan club
thing and you’re selling it. And
he’s like, yes, let me send you
one over. And this was just
beautiful. What I learned from
John was to give away a color
sheet at every magic show to
every kid gets a coloring sheet.
And it’s a picture of the
magician and his bunny or
whatever it is. But they get to
color it, right. And on the
bottom, John said put your phone
number and offer them a free
magic trick and you can just
photocopy these little magic
tricks that they could make out
of paper somehow. And they’ll
call you and they’ll sign up for
the free magic club. And when
they call, you’ve got to get
their name and address; you
might as well get the birthday.
And the parents will call and
they’ll sign them up and the
kids will be excited about it.
They want to get the magic
trick. So, I thought about it
and I thought, well I don’ know
if that would work or not, but
maybe I’ll try it. Well, in the
meantime, I had gone over to
friend’s house. She’d asked me
hey will you come over Brian and
make some balloon animals. My
nephews and nieces are in from
out of town. And it would just
be fun. Well I go over there and
start making balloon animals and
she introduces me to her nieces
and nephews and she says hey
guys this is Uncle Brian. And
they’re all like, Uncle Brian,
hi Uncle Brian. Can you make me
a sword? Can you make me a hat?
Can you make me a puppy dog? And
man it just knocked me on the
floor. They kept saying this,
Uncle Brian. And…
Michael: I remember this in your
letters in your Advertising
Magic.
Brian: And I became Uncle Brian
that day. And it was a branding
and I had a cartoonist put
together a logo and a caricature
of me. I became Uncle Brian. And
that is when my magic business
started to overtake—profit
wise—the janitorial business.
And I had a sister-in-law and a
brother-in-law who would go out
and do the cleaning for me on
some of the bigger jobs and I
would just keep the weekend
routine. When I became Uncle
Brian, I started using that.
That was just magical. And what
happened with the birthday fan
club…here’s what happened. After
I became Uncle Brian, I decided,
you know what, I think I will do
this fan club deal. But I’m not
going to make them call me. I’m
going to put a fan club
application at the bottom of
this coloring sheet. It’s a
legal sized paper with cut-off
application. And at the bottom
of the coloring sheet portion,
above the application, it said
hey Mom or Dad, got a birthday
party coming up for your son or
daughter? Uncle Brian makes a
great hassle free birthday party
for you, and tons and tons for
the kids.
Michael: That’s great.
Brian: Call today and gave my
number. I was doing these
pre-schools and elementary
schools and I was giving out
coloring sheets by the
thousands. Every time I’d do an
elementary school show, I’d get
home and there would be six
birthday party messages waiting.
Michael: Wow.
Brian: We’ve got a birthday
party next weekend, can you make
it, can you do it. And, of
course, urgency creates demand,
so I get to charge more. And
anytime I do a pre-school show,
I’d almost always get one
birthday party from a pre-school
show, too. Now, the other thing
that happened is my mailbox got
jammed with fan club
applications. I started my own
database, my own mailing list. I
had the parents name, I had the
kid’s names, I had their age, I
had their birth date, and I
would mail the hard hitting, but
warm hard sell sales letter to
the parent. And that letter was
pulling right about 36%. I was
mailing these out. I would
even…this is so funny Michael, I
even have kids send me their
coloring sheets that they
colored, write a note on the
back…Uncle Brian you’re so
funny. Oh and I’d even…and this
was classic…I even had this
little girl call me the week
before Thanksgiving…Uncle Brian
are you coming to Thanksgiving
dinner? Can you believe that?
Michael: Yes, I believe it.
Brian: They loved me. It was
good. I mean I really, really
was. You have to be good to get
that kind of passionate response
from the kids.
Michael: That’s great. I bet you
were having a great time with
it.
Brian: I really was. It was a
lot of fun. It was a lot of
work. On Saturdays, I was doing
14 to 20 birthday parties all
day and I was driving 90 miles
an hour on the freeway to get
around the Valley to these
shows. Then I had this
restaurant gig on the weekend
where I’d go and I’d do magic at
the tables. Patrons would get me
corporate shows. I started
selling myself as a trade show
magician. And I had to do that
by phone because I couldn’t
figure out a way to do that…
Michael: Good money in that?
Brian: Oh yes. I did really
good. I did probably 20 trade
shows over two years. And I was
getting at least $1,000 a day
and each show is about…it was
two to three days. So, those
were God sent for my family.
Michael: So, you were always
looking for bigger and better
and more?
Brian: Yes. But I had to keep
the elementary schools going
because that’s how I got the
message out. You’d pass out a
thousand coloring sheets at a
single show. What a great
opportunity for marketing. But
it’s disguised as a free
coloring sheet. Plus the free
gift, the $10 value when you
sign up for the fan club. So,
there was lots of incentive
there. So anyway, somehow, I
found out about this marketing
seminar for magicians. So, I
spend $395, which was a lot of
money for me to spend, and I
took a plane down to
Albuquerque. And I want to tell
you this because this is the
turning point from brick
stacking to janitorial to magic,
and now we’re going into
copywriting. And I was at the
seminar and I had brought my
birthday letters and my school
letters. And the school letters
had consistently pulled 15-20%
return. Like I said, for every
100 letters I’d mail, I’d get 15
shows at least. And I brought
the birthday party letters that
were just blowing the doors off.
I was booking so many birthday
parties with that letter. I’d
send it out about three weeks
before the child’s birthday for
the birthdays of April, or what
have you, and man that was just
phenomenal results. So, I took
these letters down, and we’re
talking, we’re talking. You’ve
got to understand, I was like
the class clown of the seminar.
And I just loved it. It just all
clicked. It went really well.
Michael: How many people were
down there?
Brian: There were probably about
50, but some of them were
couples.
Michael: How old were you now?
Do you remember that?
Brian: I was about 28 or 29. At
first I sat at the very front
row, very center. I’m here to
learn. And I started to realize
that except for the guys that
were explaining well here’s what
I did to get business and here’s
how it works and blah, blah,
blah; I pretty much knew more
than these people—other than
Brian. I’m sure Brian Flora knew
a lot more. He was brilliant,
but anyway, I was way up front.
Well anyway, I ended up in the
back row making wise cracks,
right. And I’ll never forget
this and this is why it’s so…I
just want to explain the
details. We had an aisle down
the center and to the left and
right of this aisle were tables
with about four chairs, five
chairs per table. And I was
sitting in the back on the
inside chair to the right of the
aisle; see a clear view of the
speaker. There was another
gentleman sitting in the front
row on the opposite side of the
aisle on the inside, just as I
was—just the exact opposite.
Now, this guy we all had a lot
of respect for. His name, I
think it was Thomas Alexander.
This guy was well connected. We
all knew it. We could all sense
it. He lived in Hollywood. He
knew Gene Roddenberry. In fact,
he wrote Gene Roddenberry’s
biography.
Michael: Who is Gene
Roddenberry?
Brian: Oh he’s the guy that
created Star Trek.
Michael: Okay.
Brian: So, we were like wow,
this is the guy. This guy knows
stuff. He knows people. He’s
amazing. We just held him in
this high esteem as a group.
Well anyway, I shared these
letters. Mr. Flora was talking
about copywriting and I just
raised my hand and said, you
know what, I’ve got something
here that I’d like to share with
the group. And I held up my
letters. And he goes, yes go
ahead, Brian. And I held up
these letters and I explained to
them what was going on, you
know, I was pulling 36%
response, 15-20% response. And
there was this silence because I
said is that pretty good? And
their jaws were just on the
floor. And Brian goes, hell
yeah, and everybody just erupted
with laughter and cheering.
There was like. You’ve got to be
kidding me. I was just excited.
Anyway, this Gene Roddenberry
dude, right, forgot his name, I
think it’s Thomas Alexander.
Finally after all had kind of
settled down and everybody’s
like can we get copies of those
and blah, blah, blah, and all
that. We were all sitting back
down. He looks straight back
down the row at me and I could
see this as plain as day and he
says, well get out of the magic
business and get into the
copywriting business. There’s a
hell of a lot more money you
could make. And everybody
laughed and laughed and laughed.
And I didn’t laugh. I just went
what…what are they talking
about. So, I talked to him and
he explained it. Yes, people
will pay you to write their
radio ads and their TV and well,
obviously, you’re good at
letters. People pay a fortune
for you to write a letter for
them. And so, my eyes lit up,
and that’s the point that I
really decided, okay I’m going
to start selling this
copywriting stuff.
Michael: What was the first
thing you did when you got back?
Brian: I thought about it. I
went through the Money Making
Marking book from a copywriter’s
point of view instead of a
magician’s point of view. And I
tried to make a plan. I tried to
come up with who is going to
hire me. And it was tough. It
wasn’t as easy as magic. I just
couldn’t see. And I thought well
maybe with ad agencies at first.
They don’t want my kind of copy.
It ended up being a really,
really tough way to go. An
interesting thing happened. It
was November ’91, I went to that
seminar. And so I struggled to
build a copywriting business on
the side. By the time the next
November rolled around, it was
time for another seminar, which
I did go to. I was doing okay. I
was a copywriter. I probably
brought in $800 a month more,
but I was still doing magic
shows. Let me backup two
months—September I did a card
deck card in one of Jeffrey
Lant’s card decks. Now card
decks were getting kind of stale
at that point, but I thought—I
didn’t know that first of
all—but second of all, I thought
what the heck. It’s going to
business people.
Michael: And this is a card deck
that Jeffrey Lant put together?
Brian: Yes. And I actually did a
few other card decks, too. I did
like two other ones. And had I
done it a year earlier, I think
it would have been wildly
successful, but by then, card
decks were just over used and
people just didn’t have any
attraction to them anymore. You
used to find really killer ideas
and deals in a card deck.
Anyway, it got me some leads and
it did close me some deals. On
the cards—as a side note—I just
put learn the ten most common
marketing mistakes and how you
can avoid them. I kind of touted
myself as a copywriter/marketing
expert, and the secrets we’ll
share with you. And it did.
Michael: Had you heard of
Abraham by that time?
Brian: Yes I had actually. Well,
that was the other thing. At the
seminar, I met a gentleman by
the name of Millard Grub.
Michael: Oh yes. I know Millard.
Brian: And he introduced me to
Jay. He was hesitant to, but he
introduced me to Gary Halbert.
Michael: Was he a magician at
that time? Was he doing magic?
Brian: I think he was a
hypnotist. But he was at the
seminar.
Michael: So, that’s where you
first learned about Halbert and
Abraham?
Brian: Yes.
Michael: At that seminar?
Brian: Well, it was from meeting
Millard at the seminar.
Michael: Did you buy any of
their stuff?
Brian: I bought everything.
Michael: So, you got all of Jay
Abraham’s stuff?
Brian: I became a lifetime
subscriber to Gary Halbert based
on what Millard told me. I’ll
never forget. He was just dying
with excitement. He says, Brian,
I’m not going to tell you this
guy’s name, but every month his
letter comes in my mailbox and I
just fall all over myself to get
to the mailbox and rip that
thing open. And I just devour it
from the moment I get it. This
guy is a genius. And so I said
sign me up. What was it…I think
$2,400 on a credit card just to
be part of that. Yes, so I kind
of got introduced to that and I
did the card deck. I had some
copy business and I went to the
next magic seminar and we had a
good time. But by the time
January had rolled around, the
magic business had just fallen
off. I don’t know why. I was
mailing the same mailers, but it
was just fading off and the copy
business was magically picking
up. Now, please understand, I
was doing $350 copy job, $500.
The most I had ever gotten was
$850 for like a six-page sales
letter.
Michael: Tell me a couple of
them that stick out in your
mind? The products or some of
the jobs you were doing in the
real early days.
Brian: One of them was for Joe
Castro. I think it was InfoLink
and it was long distance
service. And that letter kicked
butt. I wish that I could find
it, but I can’t. He did
incredible with that. And then
there was a David Saunders who
hired me to sell this software
bundle. And I used the
opening…I’m going to give you
two pieces of software as a
shameless bribe. Now, these
aren’t pieces of junk software,
blah, blah, blah. But I just
want to give them to you as your
gift for trying…and I think it
was called Auto Map software.
And it was a penny letter and it
did great.
Michael: It sounds like a
Halbert letter.
Brian: I copied it almost word
for word on the intro.
Michael: So, you were devouring
Halbert stuff and using some of
the copy stuff that you were
learning from him.
Brian: Yes.
Michael: They attached a penny
to it?
Brian: Yes. They put a penny on
it and everything. We decided to
mail it in a window…the name
showing through. And we thought
between the window looking, it’s
going to go in the “A” pile more
than likely. It’s got a window
and they feel the penny…they got
to be really curious about this.
So, and it worked like crazy. It
worked like gangbusters.
Michael: Now, at this time in
your copywriting career, you
were just getting money up
front. You had no idea about a
backend or a residual or a piece
of the action on any of that?
Brian: Well, I had heard it from
Jay, but I didn’t see how to
implement it. It wasn’t a
concept that I understood. I
didn’t get it. So, really if you
look in the dedication in Ad
Magic, Millard’s names is like
right there up front
because—only after my
family—because really I wouldn’t
be anywhere if it weren’t for
Millard. He’s a wonderful,
wonderful guy, too, on top of
that—just a real blessing in my
life. Well anyway, I was getting
some copy business and the magic
business had just shutoff like a
faucet almost. It blew my mind.
Michael: What was it, the
economy?
Brian: Yes, I can only assume
that that’s what it was. But
here’s what happened. I was
still doing shows, magic show,
but I was getting…probably most
of my money was coming from
these small little copy jobs. I
became a copywriter in the
Jeffrey Lant copywriting service
thing that he offered for a
while. I was getting a few small
jobs from there. About that
time, I decided I needed to get
some new glasses because I had
this spot on my eye. It’s kind
of weird. It’s was like there
was a booger on my eye and I
couldn’t get it off…wipe it
off…but I could see it and it
was just weird. And it got to
the point where if I was
standing two or three feet of
somebody, looking face on,
having a conversation with them,
the left side of their face
would become invisible. I could
see through it. It was really
weird. So, I thought, man, I
need some glasses. So, I went
into the eye doctor and he
checked my eyes. He gave me a
new prescription. Just as I was
walking out this little dark
room they have, I said by the
way, I got this little thing
going on here. It’s like I got a
booger on my eye and I can’t get
rid of it. And he’s like oh
really. Let’s have a look. So,
he looks a little closer. He
doesn’t see anything. He says,
you know Brian; you ought to
have that checked out. I’m going
to schedule you an appointment
at…oh what’s a medical eye
doctor?
Michael: Ophthalmologist?
Brian: Yes, thank you. I
couldn’t think of the word. So,
he schedules me an appointment.
So, I go over there and they do
all these tests on my eyes, and
they blow air in them and they
shoot lasers and they test my
peripheral vision; all these
tests and stuff. They shoot this
dye in my blood. Anyway, it was
really weird. Finally, I came
back three days later to meet
with the doctor to see what his
findings were. And he goes, well
there’s nothing wrong with your
eye, nothing at all. You have
really good eyes, actually. I
said well what’s going on then?
He goes; well we’re really not
sure. We’re probably going to
have you take an MRI. I said,
well what’s that? And he
explained it to me. I said okay.
I didn’t ask why. So, he goes,
we’ll let you know. We’ll call
you and let you know when that’s
going to be. So, as I’m walking
out his door and I start walking
down the long hallway, he peeks
his head of out the office and
he said, oh by the way, most of
the time when we see this, it’s
a brain tumor.
Michael: Wow.
Brian: And he jumps back in his
office.
Michael: Oh my God.
Brian: Thanks buddy. What a
tactful way to deal with that.
Michael: So, you were pretty
freaked out?
Brian: I was like, what? Okay, I
don’t have a brain tumor.
There’s something wrong with my
eye, buddy. I didn’t say that to
him, but that’s what I was
thinking to myself. So, I went
home and sure enough, I had an
MRI done and they actually had
me drive the pictures from the
MRI up to the brain surgeon and
have him look at them. They felt
that it was that urgent. And as
I was driving, I looked at the
picture and said I wonder what
that big old white thing is. And
I could see it. It really didn’t
occur to me that that was the
tumor. But sure enough, I had a
brain tumor the size of a
softball in the middle of my
head. And it had started to push
on the optic nerve. They just
said I had to have surgery
immediately. And I did. That was
rough, I tell you. I ended up
canceling three or four dozen
shows just to get through all
that. And that’s not something
you want to do when you’re
self-employed, cancel business.
Michael: Absolutely not. Did you
have insurance at that time?
Brian: I did, but they fought
tooth and nail because I had
just barely gotten it four
months earlier.
Michael: Did the insurance cover
most of it?
Brian: Actually, they hardly
covered anything. They covered
about 10% of the bill and I
ended up having to pay…well, it
was over $100,000; let’s put it
that way. I was in the hospital
for three weeks, 18 hours of
surgery, and they said I
actually died once. So, I have
no recollection of it. I gained
120 pounds in the hospital.
Michael: Wow.
Brian: It was because the
doctors had damaged the
pituitary gland while removing
what tumor they could. They got
about 60% of the tumor. Overall,
it was just a horrible
experience to go through.
Michael: I’m sure.
Brian: What it did…to apply it
to copywriting, it made me
extremely empathetic for others.
Michael, if I had to sum in a
nutshell what’s unique about
Brian and in my copywriting is
this deep compassionate empathy
that’s truly heart felt for
other people. And I think that’s
what I took away from the brain
tumor experience. I mean I had
on a certain level, a notoriety
before the brain tumor, but I
just think I gained so much
depth and breadth, virtually,
from going through that
experience. At least that’s what
I thought at the time. And
looking back on it, I see that
it has taught me a lot. It’s
been a blessing to me
spiritually and mentally; that
whole experience. Physically,
it’s still somewhat of a
challenge, but I’m actively
pursuing things to deal with
that, as well.
Michael: So, your surgery was in
1990 what?
Brian: 1992.
Michael: ’92. Before that
surgery, you said that you were
experiencing some notoriety. Had
you done some copy for any of
the bigger names out there yet?
Brian: No, I hadn’t gotten any
notoriety. What happened was,
Gary wrote a little bit about me
in his newsletter. And he was
cursing the doctors because the
doctor, the brain surgeon told
me that I probably had about a
year to live. He was just mad
because he doesn’t like doctors
playing God. The other side of
the story is, I looked the
doctor right in the eye and I
said well you don’t know me very
well, do you? A little pride
there, sorry. So, Gary wrote
about me. Obviously, that
generated some business, bless
his heart. Really what
Advertising Magic…what started
it was me seeking a procedure to
follow for my copywriting
clients. And so, I had my own
little notebook…okay, here’s
what I’m going to do first and
here’s what I need to remember
about that. For example, okay
now I’m going to write the
headline. Now remember, when
you’re writing headlines—and I
took every nugget that I had
pulled from Dan Kennedy’s book,
from Gary Halbert’s newsletter,
I mean every last stinking one
of them from every source, every
book I had ever read. I mean I
kept meticulous notes as I was
learning copywriting and I put
them into a form of a checklist
so that when I was writing
headlines, I knew to follow
these rules. And these rules had
come from ___, and Kennedy, and
etc. And I had that same type of
thing for an offer; when you’re
writing your offer,
testimonials, of course.
Everything…everything you could
imagine about a sales letter in
particular was delineated out
with rules of thumb by all the
experts. I would read everything
from anybody.
Michael: Was there any one guy
who really…any favorite out of
all the old guys—dead or
alive—that you learned, or just
little bits of everybody?
Brian: I just have to say Gary
Halbert is my favorite because
he has been so kind to me. I
wouldn’t say it’s because I
learned more from him. But if I
had a favorite in terms of who I
like the most…definitely Gary. I
have absolutely nothing bad to
say about Gary. He’s been…I call
him the Santa Clause from the
South in my life. And that’s
just my experience of him. I
absolutely love Gary Halbert.
But in terms of copy and what
I’ve learned, who I’ve learned
the most from…I would really say
my own experience.
Michael: Yes, that’s a good
answer. This process, these
checklists that you’re using for
your own copywriting business
and for your own personal notes
was what would soon become Ad
Magic.
Brian: Yes. I decided…you know
what, this is neat. I had each
page in a plastic cover that
protected it. And I took the
time to refine…if there was a
change to be, I would change it
immediately. And it became this
150-page process. What was going
on, Michael was the assimilation
of all the learning. I had knack
for writing copy, but to me, if
I wanted to play in the big
league, I had to write like the
big leaguers write. And their
advice…every time I sat down and
wrote copy, I couldn’t grab all
their books, pile them in a
pile, and make sure I had
everything. So, that’s why I
created this pre Ad Magic thing
for me to use. It was a great
blessing in my life. And I took
it to seminars and somebody saw
it, and they’re like gee can I
get a copy of that. And that
just immediately I thought wow,
I think I need to flesh this out
a little. But some of my
experience into it and put it
into something that people would
want.
Michael: Did you do that all on
your own, or did you have
someone helping you, or did
someone approach you and say
let’s do this as an information
product, or was it…?
Brian: No, it was entirely on my
own.
Michael: You wrote a sales
letter for it?
Brian: Do you remember the first
Las Vegas Ted Thomas seminar?
Michael: I’ve heard of his
seminars. I don’t remember his
first one. I may have it on tape
somewhere or on video.
Brian: Well, if you do, it’s
probably not worth watching it.
It was just a big sell-a-thon.
But they had big players coming.
Dan Kennedy came. Well anyway,
Ted had hired me to write the
sales letter to fill the room,
and they did. It was filled to
overflowing. And he brought me
up in front of the group and
said I want you to know why
you’re all here today. It’s
because of the words that this
man wrote on the paper that got
you to write out a check and
show up today. So, you can blame
him for all the money you spent.
I got a standing ovation. It was
just jammed, wall-to-wall. And
as I recall, people were
constantly peeking in the back
door at the main session. Then
they had breakout rooms. You
could choose to Dan Kennedy or
go to Robert Allen.
Michael: At that time, did you
have the confidence that you
know that it was you? You were
the person who got all these
people there.
Brian: No.
Michael: You didn’t understand
that you were the reason?
Brian: I just figured…well, hey
it’s words on paper. But people
are here because Dan Kennedy is
here. They want to hear Dan.
Mark Victor Hansen was there, I
believe. People are here to hear
him. That was before Chicken
Soup. I’m not sure what he had
accomplished at that point.
Michael: You had your course
already developed at that time?
Brian: No, but what I did, I got
some copy jobs from it and I
pre-sold Ad Magic. People would
approach me, in conversations,
well good job on the letter. My
goodness that was amazing. Are
you for hire, dah, dah, dah? And
I would introduce myself and yes
I’m also writing this book.
Well, how much is it? And I
said, well it’s going to be
$300, but I’m doing a seminar
deal, a pre-publication deal for
$177. I was so tickled pink. I
sold 22 copies at that seminar
at $177. I came home and I threw
a party. I couldn’t believe I
had made that much money. I
brought home $3,800 for
something like that and I was
just tickled pink. I couldn’t
believe it.
Michael: At the same time, you
were selling seats at a seminar
in the thousands.
Brian: I didn’t see that,
though.
Michael: So, you had to get the
product together now that you
had some sales. And you put it
together. Then did you write the
sales letter for the actual
product?
Brian: Yes, I wrote two or three
sales letter for Ad Magic. I
didn’t have anybody to mail them
to and I just wasn’t adventurous
enough to rent a list. Then
there was a guy, doggone it; I
wish I could remember his name.
He was in Colorado, Michael
something. And he had started
this skimpy little four-page
newsletter and he had like
12,000 subscribers to this thing
in no time flat.
Michael: What was the newsletter
on?
Brian: Marketing, it was like a
marketing tidbit. I just was in
awe of this guy. And somehow he
called me. He was writing copy
and I said well how are you
getting work because I really
hadn’t cracked the nut on how to
get work. But he kind of
explained what he did. He had
this letter…he’d see a guy’s
mailer and ad. He’d cut the ad
out, tape it to a piece of
paper, fold it up with this
letter and mail it to the
company and say hi dear sir,
your letter sucks. You’re open
to it, so it was good to learn
that. But he said, yes I’ve got
this list. I’ve got about 12,000
who are interested in marketing
and I’m getting ready to sell
this off. And I’m like well gee
can I rent that list. So, I did.
I was just too scared and I just
didn’t have the confidence that
I have now, Michael. I would
mail ten letters at a time. You
can imagine…
Michael: You didn’t want to
spend the 28-cents.
Brian: No, it was crazy. I just
didn’t see doing it.
Michael: Ten at a time, and what
happened?
Brian: I’d mail like ten at a
time. I just wasn’t seeing the
results that I wanted when in
actuality, I was probably
getting about 10% conversion.
But it was so little money that
I just thought, oh this isn’t
worth it. I look and I just
laugh now. I was such a
tightwad. Then I tried postcards
to people.
Michael: So, you never used this
12,000 names?
Brian: I never really. Anyway,
Ad Magic had some success by
word of mouth and I had several
hundred copies just through…I
attended a few seminars here and
there and people, they just
loved it. They loved the book.
And the testimonials came
pouring in. One gentleman made
$700,000 in the last three years
since he had purchased Ad Magic.
He became a copywriter for
himself in his own business. And
I don’t if I’m at liberty to
tell you who it is, but he’s
really active on the Web now and
making a lot of money. What
happened next was this great…
Michael: You had had your brain
surgery already. How was your
thinking and everything? Did it
affect you after the surgery as
far as thinking or writing? Did
you have to work through any of
that during that time?
Brian: Well, kind of a funny
side story to answer your
question is ___ was trying to
convince me for the longest time
that that’s my unique
competitive advantage. Surgery
made me a copywriting genius.
Michael: That’s funny.
Brian: He tried to convince me
for the longest time to do that.
But to answer your question, I’d
say no. But that’s just based on
my experience and how do I know.
My former wife would say it
affected me in every way. She’d
basically say I’m a completely
different person, and I probably
am in terms of how I think. I
just look for peace and joy at
every corner. And if that means
going with flow, then it means
going with the flow and not
fighting it. Anyway, what
happened is I had this kid
calling me. He’s going to BYU
and he was in his last year and
he had to do an apprenticeship
in his MBA. And he had to do an
apprenticeship, and he’s like
dude, I bought your book and I’m
reading it. And he talks like
that too. I bought your book,
dude, it’s awesome. It’s so
freaking awesome and you’re in
Sandy and I’m in Provo. I just
wondered, dude, if you thought I
could just apprenticeship with
you because I don’t want to go
through some corporate flap
where you don’t learn anything
about marketing. These classes
are bad enough if you know
anything about marketing…blah,
blah, blah. I’m like sure, why
not. He’s like you don’t have to
pay me anything or anything.
It’s not that kind of deal. I’m
like I’ll pay you. He’s like no,
no, dude. I just want to do it
for the experience. Anyway, this
guy became just a great friend
to this day. Jason Perry is his
name and he’s a genius—really
beyond genius, if you ask me.
He’s like dude, why don’t you
rent a list? Why don’t you rent
a list and mail? I like are you
crazy. That would cost money.
And he’s like dude you’ve got
to. This book is so good. You
could bless so many people’s
lives with this. It’s like
you’re sitting here hoarding.
All this gold and you’re not
sharing with people. That was a
paradigm shift for me. I hadn’t
looked at it like that. It was
laws of abundance kind of thing.
I hadn’t really considered it in
that way. He’s like look I’ll
tell you what I’ll do. I’ll pay
for the mailing. I’ll pay for
the list. I’ll pay to get it
printed if you’ll agree to do
it. I’m like no way, that’s not
fair. You’ve got to get
something out of the pie. He’s
like no I don’t want anything. I
just want you to do this, that’s
what I want. That’s all I want
out of it. So anyway, he cajoles
me into it. We rented a list and
we mailed…
Michael: What kind of list did
you rent, do you remember?
Brian: I can tell you exactly
what the list was.
Michael: All right, tell me.
Where did you find it first of
all?
Brian: Somebody had told us that
Jay Abraham had started a
newsletter with Philips. One of
us found out about it. And so,
we just got in touch with
Philips and said hey, are you
guys doing a Jay Abraham
newsletter. And they’re like
yes; do you want to subscribe?
And I’m like yes, sure, sign me
up, but I want to find out if
the list is for rent? And it
was, and it was for rent. So,
true to his word, Jason rented
the list.
Michael: Five thousand names?
Brian: Yes, he paid for mailing.
Michael: Do you know how big the
list was at that time?
Brian: Yes, there was like
12,000 names on the list. And he
said let’s just test 1,000; see
how it goes. If it goes dude,
we’re going to mail these and
we’re going to mail them hard.
And sure enough, the letter
pulled$17 for every dollar we
invested.
Michael: Wow. So, you mailed
that first thousand…
Brian: We did them all. We did
them all in-house. I paid my
kids to stuff and stamp…
Michael: A plain number ten with
a hand address or how did you
address the envelopes?
Brian: They were…have you seen
that Jay Abraham label that he
does. It’s about four inches…
Michael: Yes, it’s like a
white…were you mailing the
letter in a number ten or?
Brian: No, it was a number
nine…no…or a…
Michael: Like a legal 8.5 x 11
size?
Brian: There you go, thank you.
Michael: With Abraham’s…it’s
like a mailing label…a white…
Brian: Yes, it’s like…it’s just
like three inches. Yes, we were
using those and laser printing
those and slapping them on the
envelope.
Michael: So, you’re mailing like
an 8.5 x 11 envelope?
Brian: Yes.
Michael: Just like Abraham does
when he promotes his seminar?
Brian: Yes and it says Michael
Senoff - Important, or Michael
Senoff -- Private. Important was
the word we used. And, yes, $17
for every dollar is the worst we
did. And I must have mailed
out…we looked at that entire
12,000 names about 12 times.
Michael: Wow, and every time it
still produced…
Brian: Every time I made
money—every time up until the
very last time.
Michael: So, this was really
your first major direct mail
experience?
Brian: Yes, well for my…
Michael: For yourself.
Brian: With my money on the
line, you bet, yes.
Michael: So, how many courses or
how many dollars did you pull in
after you finished that
campaign?
Brian: Well, because I never did
go to a mailing house, we did
them all in-house, we did like
1,000 every other week. And we
mailed for 18 months. We mailed
that list for 18 months.
Michael: But when you re-mailed
to the list, did you pay a
rental fee?
Brian: Well, here’s what
happened. We finished mailing
all the names. You know, we
mailed once a week. I’m sorry, I
told you every other week. But
we mailed once a week. We mailed
every Friday afternoon to get it
on Tuesday or Wednesday. I
called John Philips after I’d
gone through the names and I
said I want to mail these names
again. And he said okay, go
ahead. I was like don’t I need
to like rent them again? He’s
like oh no, don’t worry about
it. Mail it again. So, we did.
We just mailed and mailed. I got
through the names and I called
him back and said hey, I got
through all the names again, we
want to mail again. He’s like
well dude you don’t have to…I
was just like what the heck.
This is weird. I think what had
happened is they cancelled the
newsletter and they just didn’t
care anymore.
Michael: Wow. Did you ever
quantify what you did over those
18 months—the number of courses
or dollar amount?
Brian: Essentially, we ended up
selling…I think it was about 25%
of the 12,000 names. It was just
over…going five percent. That’s
like what…3,000-3,200 copies.
Michael: Thirty-two hundred
copies. Now, was this some of
the most money you ever made?
Brian: Oh yes.
Michael: That couldn’t touch
your fees for copywriting or
magic?
Brian: Well, I was getting all
kinds of copywriting from Ad
Magic. The best business card
I’ve ever had. That’s when
people read it, they’re blown
away…let’s face it, it’s a great
book. It’s amazing. And people
will read it and they’ll think
man this guy knows his stuff.
Any successful person, they
don’t have the time to sit down
and write their copy unless they
love doing it. There are
exceptions and those exceptions
are the people who really do
love writing copy no matter how
much money they make; they still
do it. And there are people like
that, which I think is great.
But, any other guy who finds it
a struggle, he reads the book
and says oh my gosh, this guy
wrote the bible on this topic. I
think I’ll just call him. That’s
really been how I’ve gotten most
of my business. And since them
it’s all…
Michael: Now, at that time when
you were doing copywriting jobs,
did you have the confidence to
ask for a piece of the action on
the backend; gross sales?
Brian: It’s all a mystery to me.
Michael: It was a mystery still?
Brian: Yes.
Michael: You were only getting
fees just for writing?
Brian: Yes, I had one gentleman
offer to me and it was an
interesting story. But anyway,
he ended up making about $5
million in five months and did
not pay me the royalty that he
agreed to pay. I always just did
hand shakes and I just trust
people. I feel I trust people
too much, now, but at least I
always have an agreement now.
Michael: Would you feel
comfortable naming just some of
the clients that you got
copywriting jobs from directly
through the success of your
Advertising Magic course?
Brian: Yes, sure. I wrote for
Jay Abraham.
Michael: Did he call you
personally?
Brian: Yes. He called me from
his beach house. That was kind
of an interesting project. He
paid me some high compliments
and that was nice to hear. And
Gary Halbert has hired me. Paid
me my full wage for stock market
sales copy he had me write.
Michael: Did you write his piece
for his stock market system?
Brian: Oh no. Scott Hames wrote
that piece. I wrote the follow
up to that that went to leads
that hadn’t bought yet. I wrote
the follow up letter. It
converted really well. I’m
trying to remember what the
numbers were…just recently, too.
Michael: Was that stock market
course of Halbert’s…was that
being mailed pretty big time?
Brian: Yes, they rented a lot of
lists. They rented the Philips
publishing master file. They
rented the whole thing. But it
does indicate continuation from
Gary’s company.
Michael: Let’s talk about some
stories. What I’ve got here…I’ve
pulled off my shelf a book
called, A Big Fat Beefy Book
Full of Nothing But Winning Ads
and Sales Letters. Tell me about
this book. Where did this come
from?
Brian: It was just sort of my
own personal swipe file. At
first, that’s how it started
out. And that’s how Ad Magic
started out. It was just my own
little checklist to see that I
keep up on things with. It was
sort of the same thing. I had
done all this copywriting. I had
done all this work and I just
wanted to have it near by, in
front of me, just to refer to
for inspiration purposes. And
the other things was, I had a
potential client ask for some
samples. They were just really
skeptical. And I just got a
little ticked off. I was
like…okay this guy…my ego…my big
head being “famous,” this guy
wants to see samples. I never
have anybody ask for samples.
What I did was I said okay fine.
This guy wants samples; I’ll
give him samples. I literally
did. It’s about an inch thick,
probably a little more and I put
a cover on it and I said here
you go. Here’s a big, fat book
full of nothing but winning ads
and sales letters. I got to
thinking about it. I thought,
wow, I bet a few other people
would like to see that.
Michael: I remember who I got
this from and I only had one and
it’s something I never want to
resell. It says, please return
after seven days to Brian Keith
Voiles. What’s that all about?
Brian: Yes, that’s what I ended
up doing. I ended up using them
as sample books. I started
offering this sample book to
potential clients. I mean it’s a
pretty hefty book. I haven’t
seen one in years and I need to
get a copy of it from you. It’s
a substantial investment to send
out to a prospective client.
Michael: So, there’s nothing but
winning ads in this book. Can we
talk about some of these in
here?
Brian: Sure, I’d love to.
Michael: “What your banker won’t
tell you about your mortgage is
costing you a fortune. Your
mortgage lender is taking you
for a ride and their grubby
little hands are in both your
pockets slowly sucking out your
retirement, your savings, your
entire financial future.” What’s
the story with this client?
Brian: I couldn’t tell you.
Michael: You don’t remember?
Brian: I don’t remember in the
slightest.
Michael: It was signed by John
Avery, Mage Enterprises, Inc.
Brian: I recognize that name.
Michael: All right. Let’s move
on. How about this one, “How to
master the art and science of
writing killer ads and sales
letters.” Now, I know this is
for your Ad Magic. You had
mentioned earlier that you wrote
three or four different versions
of your Ad Magic sales letter.
Brian: That’s right.
Michael: Did you figure out
which one pulled best?
Brian: Yes, the one you’ve got
in front of you, I’m pretty sure
the first letter and made money
and it did all right. But I just
kept tweaking and refining and
ultimately I ended up with a
really great sales letter.
That’s just kind of what you’ve
got to do if you’re serious
about making it profitable. Now,
back then, all there was, was
direct mail.
Michael: Can you remember
difference in the results from
your first letter to the time
you revised it four times?
Brian: I think that letter
you’re looking at there Michael,
was…I think it pulled in $6.52
for every dollar invested.
Michael: And then the last one
you had mentioned earlier pulled
in…what was it $17?
Brian: Yes, $17 average. It hit
up to 36, as low as about 12 or
so.
Michael: And were you still
testing this letter out to the
same Philips list?
Brian: Yes.
Michael: When you’re testing
against a control per and you
only want to change one element
at a time, what’s your
philosophy on that?
Brian: Well, that’s great. You
can do that, but I didn’t do
that. I re-wrote the letter all
four times. There were minor
tweaks on the last letter. Now,
that maybe where some really
refined testing comes in because
what I did is I changed the
opening page. That’s pretty much
all the tweaking I did on that
final letter. So, if you’ve got
a control that’s working, it’s
dangerous to do what I did. It’s
dangerous to just come up with…I
wouldn’t say it was entirely new
because I guarantee I used the
same bullets, I used different
elements of each letter in the
other letter. It is dangerous to
just flat out come out with a
new opening, a new letter. But
that was a risk I was willing to
take. It was a calculated,
educated risk. I wasn’t being…I
knew what I was doing.
Michael: And you’ve heard how
one headline, being the only
change in a sales letter, can
make a difference five, ten
times in the results. Would you
agree with that and if you agree
with it, can you reference any
kind of personal examples from
your experience as a copywriter?
Brian: Oh absolutely. First of
all yes, the answer is
absolutely. There’s no question
about it. A headline can change
the results on a massive scale.
One example that comes to mind…a
story that keeps bounding in my
head…Terry Dean hired me. He’s a
big, or was certainly if not
still, a big Internet guy. He
paid me to work for him for a
year. He told me the story of
how he had written this letter,
a ___ on Carlton’s wonderful
course and he sent it to John.
And all John did was changed the
headline. Terry said just that
change in the headline was like
a 1300% increase in response.
And that’s all John did for the
critique. And Terry was like a
little disappointed, but that’s
all the critique was at first.
Then he said okay I trust this
guy. I’m going to go with it.
That’s what he told me to do and
I’m going to trust his
professional advice. So, he did
and the results were just
staggering.
Michael: I want to ask you two
things. You mentioned that he
had paid you to work with you
for a whole year. Is that
something that you offer to
clients to work with you for an
entire year and how does that
work?
Brian: Yes, that is an option. I
charge $45,000, and really that
just gets you essentially all
the copy that you and I
determine that you need for a
full 12 months. So, $45,000 plus
five percent of the gross
receipts that come in from my
copywriting. And the gross
receipts can work against the
$45,000.
Michael: So, for example, let’s
say I wanted to hire you for a
year. We would predetermine what
you’re going to do for me within
the year what projects up front,
right?
Brian: Yes, and things are going
to happen. Other things are
going to unfold. Like, for
example, I had another gentleman
who did this. His arena was the
soft market. So, that’s the
arena I was working with him in.
And he came up with this new
divorce product and he said hey
can we include this as part of
the deal and I said no because
that’s a whole new project for
me. That’s a whole new level of
research. That’s a whole new
level of figuring out what’s
going on in that market place.
So, it has to be related to it
other than saying you get up to
ten sales letters, there’s no
real limit. I give people up to
ten sales letters. The sales
letter can be 36 pages and
that’s a lot of work in other
words. So, it’s a steal of a
deal considering really we’re
just barely doubling my fee. My
normal fee is $24,500.
Michael: For one project?
Brian: Yes, for a project. Now,
that’s not just one letter. That
would be getting lead generation
we had to do, a sales letter, a
follow up letter, second, third,
fourth follow up letter. It’s
the how shebang; whatever the
client and I determine that they
need, they get.
Michael: How much time do you
spend on just the headline for a
letter?
Brian: Well, I like to brag
about how many gigabytes of
headlines I have on my computer,
Michael.
Michael: How many?
Brian: I spend forever on
headlines and I write and I
write and I write. I save them,
too. I made these cuttings of a
few, but until the creative
process has stopped, when I get
into the zone on writing
headlines, I can go for two,
three, four hours straight, and
the typical headline session for
me will end up with 300/400
headlines.
Michael: Just for one project?
Brian: Yes, just for one
project. What I try to teach
people is that you have to push
yourself because so many people
settle for that. I don’t even
think most people write a
dozen—maybe 20. I think 20 is
probably the most people ever
sit down and write. What I just
see people settling for
headlines that are wimpy and
gutless and they lack any sort
of passion for empathy for the
prospect. And what happens is by
pushing yourself like that;
you’ll find the headline number
three combines with headline
number 94. And then you take the
tagline, the end of number 253
and that’s your headline. So,
those last 100 headlines are
actually almost always little
bits and pieces of the previous
200 that I’ve already written.
Do you see what I mean?
Ninety-five percent of the time,
I just do it all on the
computer. But there are times
when I’ll start to get lost and
start to feel confused. And so,
this is a little technique that
I do and I think it equates to
Gary Halbert’s index cards that
he loves to do—spread them out
on the table. Well, what I do is
I’ll print them out on my laser
printer. I’ll end up with 30-40
pages. And then I will literally
cut and paste with scissors. And
I will cut and paste and what it
does is it sort of takes me out
of this virtual mindset of these
things virtually existing on the
computer. I love the textileness
of the paper and the cutting and
sound and the taping and the…it
just puts me into a whole
different side of my creative
mind. It’s almost like my right
brain has a left and right brain
to it.
Michael: Have you read the
Eugene Schwartz Philips
publishing speech?
Brian: Yes.
Michael: It’s very similar what
he talks about when Mozart was
composing…remember that part?
Brian: No, I don’t.
Michael: He talked about how
Mozart, when Mozart would
compose his music, he would only
write it one time. And he said
there’s a very realistic movie
called Amadeus, which is a
realistic account of how Mozart
composed. And when he composed,
he composed at a billiard table.
And he took the billiard ball
and he’s standing at the front
of the table and he had his
music sheet and an ink well and
a pen in the other hand. And he
would throw the billiard ball
down against the pool table, and
of course, it would bounce back
different every time and that
left hand would have to pay
attention to where the billiard
ball come so he would catch it.
And every time he did that, a
note of the music slip into the
back of his mind and he would
write it down. And this is
exactly what you’re talking
about when you’re creating
headlines. You’re focused in on
a past, but at the same time it
allows your subconscious to open
up and for ideas to slip
through.
Brian: Yes, okay, wonderful.
Michael: Is that wild?
Brian: It’s so cool.
Michael: You have to re-listen
to that.
Brian: I’ve got to watch that
movie, too. I’m a musician, so I
would love that.
Michael: Are you taping them
onto index card?
Brian: No, I’m just cutting them
and maybe I’ll like a phrase out
of one, but I don’t like the
rest of the headline. So, I’ll
just cur that phrase and set it
aside. I’m literally just
cutting the page into different
headlines and then I’ll take the
headlines and take snippets of
them and paste them together.
Michael: How do you boil it down
to the one or two or three
headlines that you’re going to
put on this client’s copy?
Brian: Oh, you know, that is
such an intuitive thing. I don’t
know. Some of them are just
obvious. Some of them are
actually nonsensical. Sometimes
I’ll start out by typing the big
fat lady decided to buy my
product. And that’s my first
headline. And it makes me
chuckle a little and the zip
bopping teenager decided not to
buy this products. And when I
say this product, I spell it
out. And it’s kind of just to
get me going. So, some of them
are nonsensical. Some of them
are just your…they laughed when
I sat down at the piano. They
laughed when I said I was going
to blah, blah, blah. If I’m
having a really hard time
starting, I have this little
killer headline checklist that I
go through and it’s got lots of
examples in it. I’ll just take
those examples and apply them to
the business that I’m writing
for. And that just kind of gets
me flowing. That just kind of
gets me going. But those are the
first to go. They’re purpose was
to get the creative juices
flowing. So, they weren’t part
of it. So, that’s kind of the
first level of let’s get rid of
those. And then the second level
or the dispassionate ones, I
guess you could say they’re the
ones that really don’t tend to
make any kind of connection.
They may say the benefit. They
may not. But those would be the
next ones to go. Michael, other
than that, I think putting into
words is practically impossible.
Michael: Here’s another letter.
Tell me if you remember this
one? “Mail order business in a
box. How you can easily earn
$6,408 in the next 30 days with
this turnkey mail order
business…Michael Kimble.”
Brian: Yes, I remember that. I
don’t remember anything about
the results, but I remember that
Michael mailed that for a long
time and he may still mail it.
Michael: Looks like Michael
Kimble bought the rights to all
of Bill Meyers’ products.
Brian: Bill Meyers started Group
M. Then Pat McAllister bought it
from Bill Meyers. And then
Michael bought Group M from
Patrick McAllister, and to this
day, Michael still has it. And
he does really well. I’m going
to say mid to late 90s, I was
writing all of Michael’s Group M
copy. And I know he still mails
some of it or portions of it
today. So, he’s done really
well.
Michael: Here’s another Group M
one. “Easiest way in the world
for you to cash in on the
exploding CD-Rom market without
touching a computer.”
Brian: I’ve got to get a copy of
that book. Sounds like there’s
some hot copy in there.
Michael: What kind of client was
he? Would he pay you on a per
project bases?
Brian: As I recall, yes, we kind
of did it like that and even for
a while, he did like a monthly
deal with me. I never did do a
percentage deal with Michael. We
talked about this earlier. I’m
just way too nice of a
businessperson to be managing my
own affairs. I should have. I
really should have, but that’s
okay. I’ve learned and grown
from all of my experiences. All
you can do is your best, point
in time, given the resources you
have. And if you do that, you’re
going great.
Michael: All right. Here’s
another one. See if this jogs
your memory. This is from 1995,
“In this letter, I’ll show you
how to protect yourself, your
family, and your estate from the
thieves, sharks, and government
bureaucrats who want a healthy
slice of your money, your real
estate, and any other assets.”
Brian: Wow, that sounds pretty
good.
Michael: “I’ll show you how to
set up a bullet proof, living
trust perfectly legal so that
you can control your estate
while you are living and only
your loved ones get it should
you die.” This was from Warren
Stafford.
Brian: Oh yes, Warren Stafford.
Michael: Stafford Living Trust
Protection Society. I remember
we talked earlier and this is
almost…it’s not the dark…well it
kind of maybe the dark side of a
copywriter’s life. You told me a
lot of your clients will spend
and invest a lot of money with
you and you’ll put together the
copy and the promotions for
their pieces and they’ll never
do anything with it.
Brian: Right.
Michael: What percent from your
work ends up never doing
anything with the work you’ve
done and why do you think that
is?
Brian: I would probably say 50%.
I really think that’s accurate.
Michael: And does it frustrate
you?
Brian: Oh yes, it’s discouraging
to want to even take another
client. To this day…you’ve
probably heard Gary Howard say,
oh clients suck, a thousand
times and I can’t really say I
agree with him totally. Not
every client sucks, but a good
majority of them they do because
they don’t do…they don’t keep
their end of the agreement. Not
just financially, but I’m
talking just in other ways. If
your income is based and relies
on a guy doing the mailing in
order for you to really get your
share of what you want, which is
a percentage and then they just
don’t mail, well guess what. The
pittance they paid to hire
me…that’s why my fee has gone up
because people hire me and they
don’t mail. I figure, well okay,
if they’re not using what they
pay me for, they must not be
paying enough.
Michael: Exactly because when
you do work, you’re counting on
most of your money is going to
come from the results of your
copy. And those results are only
going to come if they mail.
Brian: Right. I figure by
raising the fee, I’m going to
get a more serious
player—someone who really does
mail.
Michael: Do you work that now
into your agreement to try and
get them to follow through? Is
there any kind of thing in your
agreements, or now that you only
want to work with serious
people, what would you say to
them before you took them as a
client to make sure that or give
yourself the best possibility
that that is going to happen so
you can get your percentage?
Brian: Basically what I would do
is I would want to see other
mailers that they’ve done, the
numbers they have mailed, or…and
a lot of my clients are Web
based now…I want to see a
website that’s making money. I
don’t care if they’ve mailed or
not if they’re Web based. I just
want to know that they’ve got a
site and the site is making
money. If they’ve got a site
that is making money, then they
know what they’re doing and
they’re going to use the copy.
That’s one thing with the
Internet clients, Michael. They
tend to use the copy a little
bit more than back in the 90s
when I would get people who
would hire me and then never
even mail. That’s such a gold
mine that people are missing out
on by not taking things offline.
So, that’s one of the first
things I tell a new Internet
client is I’ll say, get offline.
Take it offline. Go rent a list.
Go do a mailing. Let’s take this
Web copy and turn it into a
sales letter. It’s easily done.
Most of the people get mad at
me. Then they say are you
kidding. That’s crazy. I’ve got
a cash cow here. I’ll say,
exactly, you do have a cash cow
that could be so much easier you
wouldn’t believe it. So, now
I’ve got this stock client and
we are taking things offline.
It’s really, really cool. It’s
really cool. We’re doing
postcards. He didn’t want to do
the whole full sales letter.
Well, actually we did. That’s
what we started with.
Michael: What’s he selling, a
stock course?
Brian: A stock training system.
And he had 16,000 prospects
sitting in a database who
responded to the Investors
Business Daily ad. They’re all
just sitting there and it was
like if they didn’t buy the
initial process, he didn’t want
to sell them.
Michael: So, he ran an ad in the
Investors Business Daily?
Brian: Yes.
Michael: Did it direct them to
online?
Brian: Yes, it took them online
where they got a CD mailed to
them. We did take them offline a
little bit there. He would mail
the CD and then people would
either call him back or he never
just got in touch with them
again. I said, okay well that’s
your gold mine. That’s the first
thing we do. We mail to the
16,000 people. Well anyway, my
point was we started mailing. We
just kicked butt.
Michael: What kind of ad was
running in the Investors
Business Daily—a display or
classified or what?
Brian: It’s a display ad. It
runs every week.
Michael: And what’s the purpose
of that ad? What does it say
basically?
Brian: It says, “A magic, little
know piece of news that
practically guarantees a stock
is going to run up.” And then it
goes on and has a little
description. And then it say,
“You can find out more about
this at this free website.” It
tells you all the information
you need to know and it does. It
really does deliver. And it
educates them. And they go there
and what happens then is they
call and they request a free
audio seminar CD.
Michael: They call from a number
on the website?
Brian: Yes, that’s right.
Michael: There’s no form to fill
out where the names are taken
automatically?
Brian: Right, no form.
Michael: So, it’s just a letter
and then a phone number for them
to call to get their free CD? Is
it a long letter?
Brian: Yes, it’s fairly lengthy.
You bet.
Michael: And they call for their
CD. The CD was sent out. And now
are you mailing that same letter
that was on the site in hardcopy
to them?
Brian: He wasn’t at the time.
But, I suggested that we do
that. But see what happened is,
he had those 16,000 names and I
said well that’s great. The lead
campaign is going great. The ad
is pulling like gangbusters. So,
that’s great, but you’ve got
16,000 leads in here from his
own ad that he had written.
That’s your gold mine. All we
have to do is mail them because
he hadn’t done any follow ups
with it. I wrote a little cover
letter and reworked his website
sales letter. Turned it into a
sales letter and it just kicked
butt. Gee, the numbers are just
eluding me today.
Michael: That’s okay.
Brian: It’s not a pretty site.
It’s not pretty at all. That’s
what’s so crazy about it.
Michael: Do you think there’s
some psychology there, having a
site that’s not pretty compared
to pretty?
Brian: I do. I liked it. I think
it’s awesome.
Michael: So, what was on the CD?
Was it just audio?
Brian: It was just a seminar
that he did in Park City and it
delivered value, but it also
closed them on getting this
system. And we got some great
positioning with it, too. We
just did great with that. But he
got tired. He got tired of
mailing. It was such a pain in
the butt to mail. And I said
well let’s get a mailing house
to do it. And he says, I don’t
know. I’m just tired of mailing.
It’s a pain in the butt,
basically is what he’s saying.
Michael: And that’s why clients
suck.
Brian: Well, this is probably
the most fun, most enjoyable
client I’ve had.
Michael: What he’s just saying
to you, though, is Brian I’m
tired of making you money.
Brian: Yes, in a way and it’s
really discouraging because
that’s a gold mine. We ended up
mailing only 12,000 of the
names. I was ready to mail and
mail again.
Michael: Yes, 12 times just like
you did with Ad Magic.
Brian: Yes, you just keep
mailing until you get a response
that drops below break even.
That just makes sense, right?
Michael: Well, if he’s tired,
why don’t you buy the damn thing
from him? Why don’t you say,
look if you’re tired of
mailing…I did this work for you
because I’m hoping to get a
percentage on your sales and if
you’re tired of mailing, I’m not
tired of mailing. Let me do all
the mailing and let’s work
something out. And you don’t
have to deal with any of that
hassle.
Brian: Hey, that’s a great idea.
Michael: Approach him. Let me do
it. Pay me X percent. Make him
an offer.
Brian: Yes, maybe I will.
Michael: Yes, you should. An
idea for you, just think about
this. In your agreement, what
you could do is because so many
clients are like this, let’s say
you’re doing a copywriting job.
You could say that until the
conditions are met, that we both
own the rights to the copy.
Let’s say a client pays you. Who
is the copy write holder? He is,
right?
Brian: Yes, work for hire.
Michael: It maybe something you
could consider to put some
leverage on them following
through is in the agreement…the
agreement is you’re going to
hire me for my services. I’m
going to write the copy. We’re
going to share the rights to
this copy until and if you
follow through. So, let’s say
the guy never follows through
with the mailing, you could work
something in where you have the
rights to use that to recoup
what would have missed out
because he never mailed it.
Brian: Yes, that’s really…
Michael: By you holding those
rights, you’ve got some real
leverage. But the rights revert
back to him as soon as he’s met
all the conditions of the
agreement or the contract.
Brian: That’s wonderful.
Michael: You should do something
like that. If I do consulting
with clients, for instance,
let’s say I don’t get all their
money up front and let’s say I
design a website. Well, I go
ahead and register the domain in
my name. But autoresponders are
all under my control where I
control all the leads if I’m
getting a percentage of the
sales. All that’s in my control
until they’re paid up and then
that all goes over to them once
they agree to pay everything.
So, I have total control of all
the leads that come in, the
website. They have no control. I
own the system.
Brian: Wow.
Michael: It is your intellectual
property until they fulfill
their part of the contract. You
should retain those rights. And
that will really give you some
leverage because if they don’t
mail, you could use…like this
guy who is tired of making you
money. He doesn’t want to mail
to those 12,000 people. You
could even make that as part of
the agreement. Just model it for
each client saying look if
you’re not willing to mail it X
amount of times to this 12,000,
I reserve the right to recoup
what I would have mailed if you
mailed it. And I reserve the
rights to mail it five times to
your list and you pay me X
amount.
Brian: That’s great.
Michael: Here’s one. “1994 was a
year of surprise for most
investors. Interest rates were
raised six times making it
harder and harder to know what
to invest and when buy/sell
signs are getting more difficult
to interpret. But now here’s a
proven method for knowing when
to buy or sell and how to
protect your investment in these
uncertain times.” This is…
Brian: So, I wrote a stock
system before.
Michael: …John McGee,
Incorporated.
Brian: Oh okay, yes they wrote
the bible on technical analysis.
I’m really familiar with stock
trading now because I’ve been
trading the market since ’98.
So, I’m like way into it now.
McGee, that’s like those guys
wrote the bible, seriously, on
the technical analysis. I can’t
believe I wrote this.
Michael: Do you know if they
mailed offline their thing?
Brian: Yes, they did. They went
on the Internet. Yes, I know
they mailed that. I know they
did good with it. It was a
really tough one for me because
I didn’t know a thing about the
stock market. I didn’t know
anything at all about the stock
market, so that was really,
really difficult.
Michael: So, let’s talk about
that. A client comes to you.
He’s got something that you know
nothing about and you take on
the job. Well, what do you do?
Brian: You have to research. You
have to do your best to get to
know what they are, who they
are, who they’re selling to; all
that stuff.
Michael: Let’s say I come to you
with a subject that you know
nothing about and I want to hire
you. I’ve decided I want to use
you to write my offline copy.
What’s the first thing you’re
going to do in this whole
process? Let’s say I’m ready to
go. What do I need to do first?
What are you going to tell me?
Brian: I’m going to ask some
very basic questions. What’s the
name of your product?
Michael: I’ve got to pay you
money first, right?
Brian: Yes.
Michael: I’ve got to sign an
agreement with you, right?
Brian: Right.
Michael: You’re going to
determine whether I’m worthy of
your services, first. You’re
going to set an interview up?
Brian: Yes, exactly.
Michael: Are you going to record
the call?
Brian: That’s right.
Michael: So, what are you going
to do first with me? We’re
recording the call and you’re
going to ask me…
Brian: I’m going to ask some
very, very basics. And then I’m
going…what’s the price point,
what are the payment options,
what’s the product called or
service called; things like
that. And then, if they have a
sales crew—a lot of my clients
do—I’ll want to interview their
top sales guy. And then maybe
I’ll want to interview their
next top sales guy. And I’ll
certainly want to interview the
guy that came up with the
company because he’s the one who
has the passion. He’s the guy
that has the fire almost…almost
all the time he’s the one. He’s
the one who has it and he may
have 20 guys working for him as
underlings. And all these guys
think they know, okay, all these
guys think they know what the
heck they’re doing—hey I’m
Executive Vice President, I’m
Vice President of Marketing and
you’re doing marketing so I know
what to tell you to do. It’s
goes on and on like that. But
really the truth of the matter
is, there’s no one better than
the proprietor. There’s no one
better than the creator. That’s
the guy I love to talk first.
Michael: Is it because you want
to capture his passion, his
words and translate that into
the letter?
Brian: Absolutely. You nailed it
on the head. That’s exactly what
my intension is. There will be
no one in the company with his
kind of fire.
Michael: And fire is what sells
product.
Brian: You bet. And then what
I’m going to do is I’m going to
dig for testimonial. And trust
me, it’s usually a dig.
Michael: Why do you say that?
Brian: Most companies just don’t
have them. If they do, they’ve
got a few really, really
generalized quotes. They don’t
talk any specific benefit. For a
testimonial for me, for example,
for my Ad Magic product would
be, “before we got your product,
we were pulling three percent
response and now we’ve been
using Ad Magic and we’re getting
consistent 8.5-8.325% specific
to me.” Most companies don’t
have specific results oriented
testimonials. That’s the next
thing. If I’m loaded with great
testimonials and a risk free
proposition guarantee, in other
words, I can sell anything. The
truth is I can sell anything.
Michael: Is that something you
want to make sure you get up
front from your client; that’s
he’s willing to back his product
up with a risk free? Is that
something you’ve discussed
before you take them on?
Brian: No, but that’s a great
idea. That is a great idea. That
would set me up for success and
I thank you for the idea because
really that sets me up for
success. If they have a risk
free proposition, that’s just
unbeatable.
Michael: So, how long does this
interview process take between
the founder of the company, the
salesmen, digging for
testimonials…this happens over a
week, two weeks, or what?
Brian: I’ve got a tough job
right now. They don’t have
testimonials. The guy’s got a
track record like just
incredible, but they don’t have
any. And I told him, give me
names, give me numbers; I will
call. We need this. You need
this to sell. You need it to
make the sale.
Michael: You should put that as
a requirement, too. Look, if
we’re going to work together,
I’m going to require
testimonials. It’s just part of
the process, otherwise, we’re
not going to be doing business.
You’ve got to lay all these
things out up front so they know
exactly what they’re getting
into.
Brian: Thank you for your
wonderful ideas. It seems s
obvious now that we’re talking
about it because really, and
this is just great truth coming
out from the innocence of an
interview. I can sell anything.
The truth is I can sell
anything. First of all I have to
want to sell it. I have to
believe in it. Second of all, if
they’ve got testimonials that
are decent…they don’t even have
to be great, and if they have a
risk free proposition, I can
sell anything.
Michael: What do you think is
more important, the risk free
proposition or the testimonials?
Brian: I really think the
testimonials are more important
because we’re all just so
skeptical, it’s unbelievable.
Testimonials coupled with a risk
free proposition is the best way
to overcome any level of
skepticism in any prospect. I
guarantee you I can sell
anything.
Michael: To put that right up
front in the beginning of your
letter to let them know up front
before they even have time to
dump it.
Brian: Most of the time what
I’ll do Michael, is I’ll mention
the guarantee. I’ll make mention
of it like this will work for
you or you get your money back.
So, I don’t go into the
specifics of the guarantee, but
I always make mention of it in
almost every letter I write
unless it’s going to come across
as too hypie for that target
market.
Michael: You’ve got the
interview process done, is most
of your research all done
through the interviewing over
the phone, or do you do
additional outside research;
maybe go to the library, do some
research on the Internet, look
at competition? Do you look at
their competition for your
research?
Brian: Oh absolutely, you have
to do that. Yes, you have to.
You have to be positioned. Like
a software company recently
hired me to write their box copy
for a product that’s going into
Office Max and Office Depot. I
told them; look you guys aren’t
even considering the competition
here. What’s up with that? You
guy are oldest in the business.
You’ve got the best reputation.
You don’t have the biggest name,
but you’ve been doing this
longer than anyone and you know
what you’re doing. It’s the most
complete package, but you’re not
even bringing up the
competition. You’re not even
mentioning it. He’s like, wow, I
never even thought of that. I’m
like, wow, you really ought to.
That’s just marketing 101. But
it’s not 101 to most businesses.
It’s really not. But to you and
I, it’s no brainer stuff. You
have to consider the
competition.
Michael: You’ve done your
interviews on the phone. You’ve
done outside research. Now what
do we do?
Brian: Well, if they’ve got a
killer sales guy, like I
mentioned—and I do want to point
this out again because it really
is a big deal—it’s the old
concept Gary Halbert introduced
eons ago and probably someone
did before him to record your
sales calls and that gives you
your best copy. And so what I do
is I get the sales guy on the
phone…ideally he doesn’t know
that it’s me. Ideally he thinks
I’m a regular Joe prospect.
Michael: So, you call him up as
if you’re interested.
Brian: Right.
Michael: And you’re acting.
Brian: Absolutely.
Michael: That’s great.
Brian: And I just say, hey and I
just go through all the crap. I
give him a hard time. All the
toughest objections he could
ever think of I have to get
answers. I tell you, you get
gold, copywriting gold from…
Michael: He doesn’t have a
governor on his thought…
Brian: Right.
Michael: …and he’s just doing it
subconsciously and that’s why
he’s the best. He’s just
rolling.
Brian: Exactly.
Michael: Sometimes salesmen can
have an off day. Have you ever
had maybe one of those days when
you’re trying to elicit that
stuff and you’ll call back
again?
Brian: Oh yes. I’ll call and
I’ll talk to the next best guy.
Then maybe I’ll call a week
later…hey I have some more
questions for you about that.
I’m going to put them through
the ringer. I want to make them
go through their process to get
me closed. And a lot of times
it’s really fun because a lot of
time I really am interested
enough to the point where I
would consider buying this.
Michael: What do you do with
those recordings? Do you have
someone transcribe them out or
do you do it yourself?
Brian: I do it myself. I just go
through them.
Michael: You record them on a
digital thing, or a tape player,
or what?
Brian: I’ve just been doing a
tape player, but I’d be
interested to find out how
you’re doing it. I just do a
tape player. And what happens
when I’m transcribing
that…sometimes it’s very boring
and tedious.
Michael: You’re integrating
everything, though.
Brian: Yes, but I’m going
through and feeding the
subconscious, and sometimes, and
this is always really exciting,
sometimes I’ll just get flashes
of headlines, flashes of copy
pieces, closers; things like
that. I love it when that
happens and it happens fairly
consistently. I’ve been avoiding
working on this current client
that I told you was going to be
difficult because they don’t
have testimonials. I’ve been
avoiding doing the transcripts.
Michael: It’s real work,
Brian: It’s not that enjoyable
transcribing like that, but…
Michael: But it’s an important
process.
Brian: Yes.
Michael: Well, what you can do
is you can get a transcriber to
transcribe it and then just like
Eugene Schwartz talks about his
systems. He’s got it all typed
up. He has it transcribed and
then he goes through it and
highlights those important words
or flashes or if you get a
headline idea, you write that
down. Just do a read through,
line by line. That may be less
tedious and still somewhat the
same thing.
Brian: Yes, that’s a great idea.
Michael: That’s impressive to
know that you transcribe these
things out word for word
yourself. I pay a
transcriptionist to do my
recordings and I know an hours
worth of recording can be 30-40
pages of text. That’s an
incredible amount of work, but
that’s all part of the process
that your clients are getting.
Brian: Yes, it’s a lot of work,
but it just really helps me find
that zone when it’s time to
create.
Michael: All right, so you’ve
got all this transcribed. Now,
as you’re getting headline flash
ideas, are you typing those in
or are you writing them down…?
Brian: Yes, I type them in right
along side the transcript. And
usually what I’ll do is I’ll do
a quick format to make it look
like a headline if it’s a
headline idea. I’ll just
highlight it and make it a
larger font size.
Michael: You’ve got a series of
three or four interviews all
typed in, then what do you do?
Brian: I’m usually able to
identify as I’m transcribing
what’s the killer stuff. So,
I’ll bold that. I’m just typing
and the key point, the hot point
is obvious. They’re just totally
and completely obvious to me;
the key points that need to be
brought out. What I’m looking
for is things about the
prospects pain. I’m looking for
big benefits. I’m looking for
maybe you might call hidden
benefits; things that aren’t so
obvious to the company that are
probably a big deal to the
client. Do you see what I’m
saying—to their customer?
Michael: Let me interrupt you
because that brings me to a
point. We’ve talked about
interviewing the salesman. Is
this part of your research in
asking for customers and
interviewing a buyer of the
client’s product?
Brian: Yes, I do that. Not every
time, but on a difficult project
like the one I’m on right now, I
would, yes, absolutely. And I
do.
Michael: You learn the points of
pain and things right there from
the interview, also.
Brian: Oh yes. And this is a
great point and this is a good
time to bring it up. Sometimes
when they do have testimonials,
it’s just killer to go through
those testimonials because those
customers write some of the best
doggoned headlines on the
planet. It’s amazing. I’ll pull
out a headline. It may not be
the headline, but sometimes it
is.
Michael: Right from a
testimonial?
Brian: Right from the
testimonial. I really love the
pain and I know a lot of guys
like to…oh that’s too…you
shouldn’t open a letter with a
negative…you shouldn’t be
negative in your letter. No, no,
no—I love prying into the
prospect’s pain. Sign me up. I’m
all over that.
Michael: Pain is a larger
motivator than…
Brian: That’s right. Pain is a
bigger motivator than the
benefit.
Michael: So, what are you going
to do—a benefit point headline
or a pain related headline?
Brian: The majority of the time,
I’m doing pain…unless there’s
just this really huge benefit
that is really obvious, I’m
focusing on the pain.
Michael: So, you’re looking for
pain, you’re bolding, you’re
looking for headlines. Are you
writing the letter now?
Brian: Oh sure. I wouldn’t
separate the two. It’s part of
the deal. Its just part of what
I do.
Michael: Do you do a headline at
one, the opening at one, the
closing at one time, the order
card at one time, the body…how
do you work that out into this
whole process?
Brian: After the interview and
transcription—and some
brainstorming obviously goes on
there—if I hit on a headline
during the interview, I might
stop and brainstorm for more
headlines based on that same
theme. But the first thing I do
is I get the offer in writing. I
want to say it perfectly clear
what the offer is because that’s
my target; that’s my goal.
That’s where I’m taking them and
I have to be perfectly clear
about what the deal is so that I
can sell the deal. Does that
make sense?
Michael: Yes.
Brian: I’m going to write the
offer first. And it may evolve,
it may unfold, it may add
payments, we may add bonuses, we
may this that and the other. But
the offer is essentially…here’s
what you get, here’s the
guarantee behind it, and here’s
how you pay for it.
Michael: Do your clients give
you some flexibility in that, or
do the clients…?
Brian: I don’t care if they do
or not. I just assume it and I
say here’s what I’d recommend.
Michael: Are you recommending
price point, too?
Brian: Yes, I do. Based on my
experience, I would recommend
that you do this, consider that,
not do this, not say it that
way. Most of the time, I tell
them to change the
guarantee—extend it, make it
longer. Almost always, always
have to do that.
Michael: If you get the
headline, you’ll handle that and
you start with the offer, and
then what?
Brian: Then I’ll really get
serious about brainstorming the
headline. I’ll just buckle down
because it’s all there. It’s all
in the subconscious. It’s
already…I’ve listened to it.
I’ve done the research. I’ve
listened to the interview two or
three times. Transcribed the
doggoned thing. Took notes,
etc., etc. It’s all in there.
It’s all upstairs. It’s just a
matter of creatively slitting
those wrists and letting it all
flow. So, the first thing I’d
like to have let flow is the
headline. Headlines are easy for
me I guess you could say. Are
they ever really easy…I don’t
know. I don’t know…I just have
fun thinking about it. If it’s a
product I like, I do, I just
have fun. It’s just fun.
Michael: You’re talking about
some hesitancy with the product
because you’re not really into
the product. Is that something
you think about before you take
on a product because you’re
investing so much time in it and
maybe not to take something on
that you’re not into?
Brian: Yes, I’m really hesitant.
This one is stock market
related. So, I just thought, hey
I can do that. I can do this.
But they’re just weird. It’s the
Air Circle Club. Newsletter
subscriber based. So, in that
respect, it’s going to be pretty
easy because I know how to sell
these inner circle clubs. But
it’s just that come on man I
need some evidence. What they’re
doing is they’re just assuming
that these people love this guy
and they’re just automatically
going to sign up. And I’m
saying, look, no, no, no, it
doesn’t work that way. We need
testimonials from half of these
people who made money following
your advice and we’re going to
put those in the letter and that
way we have price justification
when we say it’s $1,000 or
$5,000 or whatever it is. We
have some price justification.
Look, this guy made $5,000 in
one trade. Now, that’s price
justification. And here’s his
testimonial telling you exactly
what he did and how he did it
using my advice.
Michael: Do you think that’s one
of the most effective ways to
get price justification in your
offers through testimonials?
Brian: I think it’s a very
cleaver way.
Michael: Yes, it is. It’s a
great point.
Brian: It’s unstated. You’re not
coming out and just having to
prove the price. You’re letting
your past customers prove it for
you. There’s nothing wrong with
coming right out with price
justification, don’t get me
wrong. I’m just saying why not
use the implied endorsement.
Michael: Let’s talk about some
price justification for your
copywriting services. Do you
have some specific examples you
can tell me about, some results?
Brian: Sure. Back in my earlier
years, Mike ___ hired me to sell
his Atom Bomb Internet Marketing
Course.
Michael: I’ve got a couple of
the Atom Bomb seminars here on
my shelf.
Brian: Well, I wrote a 16 page
sales letter and brought in over
$2.5 million for Michael.
Michael: Two point five million
dollars with that sales letter?
Brian: Yes, and he paid me
$3,500 for it.
Michael: Oh my God. That’s
incredible. How long ago was
that? That must have been back
in the early 90s?
Brian: Yes, exactly.
Michael: Who did he mail that
out to? Was that his list?
Brian: He did endorsements I
think with Abraham and Halbert
and Nicholas. He did JVs with
those gentlemen, I do believe.
Michael: That’s incredible.
That’s really incredible.
Brian: And then another one of
my success I really enjoyed was
with Robert Allen, the New York
Times best selling author. He
made $52,682 in 30 days. Filled
the seminar to overflowing. And,
of course, you know him. He’s
the sales master on stage. So,
that’s just what he made to sell
the seats and then, of course,
he sold a truckload of stuff at
the seminar.
Michael: So, you filled the
seats for him with your direct
mail letter?
Brian: Yes, in 30 days.
Michael: Was he mailing that out
to his list?
Brian: Yes. He mailed it to his
list. That’s correct.
Michael: And that’s Robert
Allen, the Nothing Down guy.
Brian: That’s right.
Michael: That’s a pretty big
client there.
Brian: He’s a great guy.
Michael: Did you make a
percentage on that backend on
that one?
Brian: No, back in the early
days, I really didn’t think I
was worth it. That’s the bottom
line on that. I didn’t think I
was good enough yet to ask for
that.
Michael: How about now? Do you
think you’re good enough to ask
for that now?
Brian: Yes. Let’s just say I ask
a lot.
Michael: That’s great. What’s
another one?
Brian: Well, a couple of recent
examples, one would be Frank
Kern. Frank’s an Internet
marketing genius. He really is
into the niche marketing arena
quite a bit. But he made
$98,838.35 in 83 days with a
letter I did for him, and that’s
not counting backend revenue,
and repeat business.
Michael: What was he selling?
Brian: A $97 course. So, that’s
a lot of sales.
Michael: Wow, and was that one
of your Internet clients?
Brian: Yes. He said that the
letter actually brought in more,
but that that’s all he could
account for. That’s all he knew;
that he’s got concrete proof
for.
Michael: Will Internet sales
copy work just as well as letter
copy on paper?
Brian: Absolutely. Why, because
human nature is human nature is
human nature, as Jay Abraham is
fond of saying. People are
people and they buy the same
way. In fact, I found it easier
to get sales on the Internet, as
long as you’ve covered your
credibility issues and proven
that what you’re offering
really—proven as well as you
can—what you’re offering really
can benefit the prospect’s life.
Michael: What’s another story?
Brian: Yanik Silver had me write
a 24-page letter to sell a
$15,000 apprenticeship program.
He’s on the third go around.
He’s doing his third
apprenticeship program using the
same exact letter. And I have a
testimonial just from the first
time he used it.
Michael: Do you have it in front
of you?
Brian: Yes, I just have an
excerpt of it here. “First
before Brian and I personally
met, I studied and devoured his
Ad Magic course, one of the
bibles of copywriting. But I
know Brian first hand because
I’ve hired him and he has made
me over $100,000 on a single
letter.” That’s when a
copywriter is really…even if you
paid $25,000, all of these
people at least doubled their
money.
Michael: You’re not going to
take a sure looser. You’re only
looking for those sure winners.
So, when you look at your odds,
there’s no 100% guarantee, but
the odds from your experience
and by looking for a “on” setup,
the odds sure are better than
the stock market.
Brian: Oh yes. Now, I know Yanik
is very conservative. He doesn’t
like to hyperbole things. But
the fact of the matter is I
think he took 15 people in each
apprenticeship deal. So if he
did that, and you add up those
numbers, there’s actually quite
a bit more than that. I don’t
know that I have permission to
talk in great deal about that
because Yanik is a copywriter. I
think he wants to be a little
more tight lipped about it.
Michael: Any other ones you can
think of?
Brian: I’ve got a current
client. Put together a sales
letter for him that was 24
pages. We mailed it to 16,000 of
his non-buyers. And out of
16,000, price point being $864;
we sold $1.52 million worth.
Michael: And that was to people
who chose not to buy.
Brian: Yes, this was like a
follow up mailing saying hey
what’s going on. You said you
were interested. What’s the
deal? How come you haven’t
bought yet? And, of course, for
24 more pages, we justified and…
Michael: Was that from one
follow up? What about a second
or third?
Brian: One mailing, one follow
up, and believer it or not, the
client got tired of mailing. He
didn’t want the hassles of
mailing any more.
Michael: Brian, you’ve got to
get with your attorney and redo
your contract and put what we
talked about in there. You can
re-listen to it when we talked
about it in the interview. And
that’s fair. They’ll sign it at
the beginning because they want
your services.
Brian: And it is fair.
Michael: You should have the
rights to do those mailings if
they get tired. That’s
unbelievable. Look, you’ve got
the letter written. You’ve got
your offer written. What are you
going to do? Are you going to
send me a rough draft before the
final draft, or are you going to
send me a draft that you think
is ready to mail first? What’s
the process?
Brian: If they’re in a hurry, in
a rush, and I can sense that
they’re getting impatient, I’ll
just send them a draft. I’ll say
first draft. Look it over and
make sure it’s the direction you
want me to take.
Michael: You send it hardcopy or
electronically?
Brian: No, I just email.
Michael: And you wait to hear
back from them?
Brian: And then they’ll come
back and they’ll say well we
just think it’s too harsh. We
just think you need to calm
down. There’s too much energy.
It’s too hypie. I hear that a
lot. And you know what…I don’t
change a thing. If they think
it’s too hypie and it’s really
not, I don’t change a thing. I
just say okay well good. That’s
good feedback. That’s good to
hear. That’s good feedback. And
then what I do is I just count
on the final draft as being so
kick butt that they just
couldn’t possibly say anything
about it.
Michael: That’s something I
thought when I read some of
Halbert’s letters or stuff. It
does sound hypie, but let’s talk
about that. Hypie work…what
would you say?
Brian: Well, to me there is a
fine line and you risk loosing
readership when you get too
hypie. But there’s a difference
in my mind. If it’s the right
prospect reading it, you know
what, he’s not going to feel
that this is hype. He’s going to
feel that this is passion.
Really what you’ve got to do is
know your prospect and know what
their limits are in terms of
what you might consider hype.
Michael: Someone who says its
hype is probably not an
interested party in the product.
Brian: Exactly, right.
Michael: But to a guy who is
passionate about it, you
couldn’t talk too hypie about a
subject that he’s passionate
about.
Brian: Yes.
Michael: That’s a great point
and that’s putting yourself in
the shoes of the prospect.
Brian: You bet. We talked a lot
about that, having the empathy
and the heart felt compassion
for your prospect. That’s all
part of it. You’ve got to speak
their language and that’s what I
really think where your passion
should flow out of is from your
prospect’s passion. They’re
super duper passionate about
whatever it is they’re
interested in. Look at me and my
music. I probably spent tens of
thousands of dollars on gear and
equipment for recording and
writing songs. I’ve got
bookshelves full of books and
courses on recording technique
and audio processing and how to
write lyrics and how to write
melodies. Have I ever once sold
a song? No. Now, I have done
some radio jingles and videotape
music for corporate videos and
things like that. But all in
all, I’ve probably made $3,000
with my music, okay. But, I’m
just so enamored with the idea
and I just love creation of the
music so much. You’d think after
spending tens of thousands of
dollars a guy would think well
it’s time to get serious and
start to make some money with
this. No, it’s not about the
money. It’s about fulfilling a
passionate desire, which is just
to create music. And by the way,
if I sell some, I’ll be tickled
pink. But my greatest
satisfaction comes from just
doing it. And I can’t read
enough on the subject. I cannot
read enough. So, if someone
wants to sell me anything that
has to do with writing songs,
playing the guitar, playing the
keyboard, playing the drums,
recording music, processing the
music, mixing the music; I’m all
ears. Every time I go into
Barnes and Noble or Borders,
that’s the first section I
check. Any new books? At least
twice a week I’m on the
Internet…any new courses, any
new books, and new things.
That’s what a really passionate
prospect is like. They want to
be sold. Now, there is a line
that you cannot cross and that’s
called honesty. To me, hyperbole
is lying. And another part of
hyperbole is yelling and
screaming at the prospect. And
how do you yell and scream from
the paper or from the screen?
Well, you use consistently
uppercase letters with
exclamation points after each
sentence. If you’ve got three
lines worth of sentences of
nothing but uppercase and you’ve
got exclamation points, you’re
yelling at me. Nobody likes to
be yelled at. It may not even be
perceived as hyperbole, but it’s
perceived as, hey this guy’s
getting a little intense with me
here.
Michael: It’s going to push the
prospect, the reader back.
Brian: Yes.
Michael: So, based on their
feedback, you will make
additional changes or work on it
more?
Brian: Yes. I’m looking at
factual things. I’m looking to
hear factuals mostly, and I tell
them that. Did I get a fact
wrong here? Did I get a
statistic wrong there? I just
want to make sure that what
we’re saying is honest truth.
Michael: Let’s talk about that
real quick. Is there any
liability on your part if you’re
creating a letter, they’ve hired
you, but even though you’re the
force behind the sale with the
sales letter, is there anything
that you’re concerned about
liability wise to keep you out
of trouble?
Brian: I never have been
concerned. I never have, no. In
my contract it does mention
things that I…
Michael: You want to make sure
that the facts are correct.
Brian: And some of the
statistics, I’ll just throw in
there and I’ll say hey I need
this statistic. Can you get me
this fact? Do you see what I’m
saying? Others make up a
statistic, but I’ll put in a
little note that says hey we
need this. We need this and
that, and I can’t find it
anywhere, and you guys probably
have access to industry
journals; things that I don’t
have access to.
Michael: Are you mainly dealing
with the founder of the company
or…?
Brian: Yes. I hate it when I
don’t to be honest with you. I
would rather not do the deal if
I can’t have direct access. I
just rather say no, never mind.
Michael: You don’t want to be
dealing with some marketing
manager?
Brian: No, I really don’t. First
of all, the marketing manager
just doesn’t have the passion.
Michael: You’ve got your
feedback. You present them with
the final letter. You send it
hardcopy or email…the final one?
Brian: I email it, yes.
Michael: What happens then?
You’re pretty much finished
until they do their job, right?
Brian: I may have to do some
rewrites or rewrite this section
or rewrite that section. Yes,
for the most part.
Michael: This is great that
we’ve gone through the whole
process, and so now I would know
if I hired you pretty much the
process that you’re going to do
for me. Tell me about one of the
biggest screw-ups on one of your
copywriting jobs—a failure?
Brian: The one that bugs me the
most…how about that. The one
that bugs me to this day was the
Mother’s At Home Magazine.
Somebody was trying to launch
____. And to this day, I wish I
could to talk to the guy…
Michael: What was it a magazine?
Brian: Yes, for mothers at home.
Michael: You were going to
launch this magazine?
Brian: Yes, and a launch is
pretty tough. And it was just
rough all the way around. I
never should have taken the
project. I just wanted to help
so much. They had such a noble
cause.
Michael: What do you think went
wrong with the whole project?
Brian: I think because they
didn’t have that much money,
they didn’t have enough trust in
me as a profession to just…I’m
not too egotistical.
Michael: You’ll make changes for
the client even though you know
inside it’s not going to benefit
them?
Brian: Yes. I won’t now, but I
was, I certainly was that way.
Michael: How many did they mail?
Brian: Not a lot. And I’m sure
the Internet’s been a real
blessing to their, I guess you’d
called it a mission that they’re
on. But all I know is, it bombed
because they just got so
controlling. They wanted to
change this, they wanted to
change that, and they wanted
to…they didn’t like the way that
talked about this subject or
this or that. It was just way
too persnickety about every
little thing. It was really
annoying. And like I said, they
just didn’t have the faith that
it takes to just trust a
professional to do his job and
to do it right.
Michael: I want you to tell me
who you’re willing to work with
and give me some idea of what
conditions…meaning I’m willing
to work with you if this, this,
this and this. But if you’re
this, this, and this and this,
I’m not interested.
Brian: Well, first of all, if
you’re spending grocery money,
don’t call me. That’s just not
wise. Or if you’re putting it on
a credit card…I turned a guy
down…it wasn’t just less than a
month ago. I said look, I’d love
to help you out. Well how did it
go? How did it unfold? The guy
just said well what’s your fee?
I know you’re well worth it.
I’ve heard just nothing but
wonderful things about you. I
told him my fee and he goes is
there anyway I can break that
into payments? I said sure, I’m
flexible on that. No problem.
So, the next day he calls me
back and he says do you take
credit cards? I said well I
could. I could take credit cards
in my PayPal account, but I
don’t want to take your credit
card. I don’t think it’s a wise
gamble for you to put this on a
credit card. So anyway, he saw
the wisdom eventually. It didn’t
take him long.
Michael: And that’s because of
his specific idea and project,
or because you knew this guy
couldn’t really afford it and it
was almost like a gamble and you
know that there’s no guarantees
in anything?
Brian: Yes, it was just straight
ahead, I’m not going to put you
into debt over something that’s
at the level of risk such as
that. I’m just not willing to.
It was really a value call on my
part. It had nothing else to do
with the opportunity, the size
of the project, where it could
go, how successful it could be.
It was just I’m not going to put
you in debt.
Michael: So, what did you
recommend to him?
Brian: I said save up your money
and what I would do if I were
you, you can write this copy my
friend. You can do it yourself.
Get Ad Magic. Study the
ba-jeezees out of it and you can
write it.
Michael: So, don’t come to me if
you’re on your last dollar
because I’m going to turn you
down. Don’t come to me if…
Brian: You don’t have good
testimonials or any
testimonials. If you don’t have
testimonials, in my mind you
don’t have a business.
Michael: So, that’s basically
don’t come to me if you’re a
startup?
Brian: Yes, you could say that.
Michael: Come to me if you’ve
got an existing business with
customers is really something
you want to work with.
Brian: Yes, and are you making
sales already. If so, I don’t
care how. Are you bringing in
consistent income for your
business, even if you’ve got
sales guys out in the field, if
you’ve got a website that’s
making money…how are you doing
it. Is there relevance?
Michael: Let’s say I am a
startup and you do decide to do
a whole letter campaign package
for me for the $24,500. But
let’s say I am an existing
business. I’ve got sales copy or
a letter that I’m mailing that’s
producing X amount of dollars in
sales. Is the fee the same or is
it structured differently
because you have something to
work with?
Brian: Think of it like this.
What kind of client does Jay
Abraham take? He takes set-ups.
He takes deals that are sure
fired, no brainer; this is going
to work. It’s like the stock
guy. He already had 16,000
leads, right. That’s a no
brainer. That’s called a set-up.
They’re set up to succeed.
That’s really what I’m looking
for. And a guy that’s got a
great product, but just doesn’t
have a sales process, which is
really what copywriting gives
you, they ought to come to me
because I guarantee if you’ve
got testimonials, great
proposition; I could sell
anything.
Michael: Don’t you have a
guarantee?
Brian: My guarantee is…see, it’s
conditioned upon you doing what
I say, first of all. Second of
all, I guarantee to rewrite your
copy as much as it takes to make
it a success if you’re actually
going to do what I recommend.
You’ve got to do it.
Michael: If someone’s not
willing to do it, don’t even
bother calling.
Brian: Yes, if you’re not going
to take action, if you’re not
going to mail the copy, if
you’re not going to run the
website, if you’re not going to
run the ad; don’t bother.
Michael: If you have a
copywriting project, or a direct
response or direct mail campaign
that you’d like to discuss with
Brian, please email your name,
your phone number, and a short
description of your project to
Brian
and he will get back
to you shortly.
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Martin: Welcome everybody. It’s
nice to have you with us today.
Sounds like we’ve got a great
crowd. Right now, I’d like to
talk about a good friend of
mine. His name is Brian Keith
Voiles. Some of you have heard
about Brian and seen his work
undoubtedly. You might not know
who did it, but Brian is a
behind the scenes guy. Brian’s
been a top copywriter in the
country for—gee in the world
really—for the past 15 years or
so. He’s written copy for people
like Ted Nicholas, Gary Halbert,
Jay Abraham, Robert Allen, Brian
Tracy, Kurt Christensen, Yanik
Silver, Terry Dean, Frank Kern,
and just a lot of different
people. You’ve seen his work
around. Brian usually gets about
$24,500 to write a piece of
copy. Very expensive, but he’s
worth every penny, right, right
down to every penny. He’s just
an excellent copywriter. Yanik
Silver just recently paid Brian
to write a 34-page letter for
him. And here’s what he said,
“The letter Brian wrote for me
kicked major butt. I’m
generating hundreds of thousands
of dollars and that was only
using it one time. If you can
get Brian interested in working
with you, grab him immediately.”
So, here’s one letter used one
time, generating hundreds of
thousands of dollars for your
business after just one mailing.
But Brian does more than that.
He also creates website copy and
he’s got a couple of excellent
books, probably the bible of the
advertising and marketing. It’s
called, Advertising Magic. And
then he has another excellent
book called, Postcard Profits.
And Ad Magic has been around for
a long time. Maybe some of you
have it in your library already.
It’s an excellent book. He talks
about a lot of very basic things
up to just exactly how to
structure a letter. So, Brian
I’d like to turn the time over
to you and have you take some
time and talk to our group and
give them some ideas on what
they might be able to do
regarding their own copywriting.
And then if they or their
clients need help, how they can
get in touch with you and what
you can do for them.
Brian: Well, thank you Martin,
I’d really like to take this
where they’d like to go. What is
the best way that I can be of
service because I could start by
talking about copywriting 101
and move past the group. And I
could start talking about
copywriting 303 and move past
the group and I’d rather find
out from everyone here what
you’d like to learn or what
you’d like to hear. So, go right
ahead and pipe in. Don’t be shy.
Michael: Hi Brian, this is
Michael Senoff, from
www.hardtofindseminars.com
, I’d like to hear from
you what you do before you write
a piece of copy, I am talking
about the research phase. What
are the questions you’ll ask
your client? And please describe
your entire process of research
and how important you think it
is in the outcome of your sales
letters or copy you write?
Brian: Michael, the biggest
thing I research is the
prospect. And I want to get in
that prospect’s mind. I want to
understand where they’re at in
life, what they love about their
life, what they hate about their
life, where they’re trying to go
with their life. And then we try
and relate whatever I uncover
with the product that I’m
pitching. Does that make sense?
Michael: Yes, but how do you do
that specifically?
Brian: Well, I do have a
questionnaire process that I
follow. It is nothing amazing;
it’s just logical type of what’s
next type of questions. Well, I
need to know about, for example,
I need to know about the client
customer base, what kind of
people is it made up of, are
they rich people, are they poor
people, are they happy people,
are they sad people, are they in
pain. I just ask really obvious
questions and really how I do
that is I get on the phone with
the guy that started the
company. That’s the ideal person
I want to talk. I want to talk
to the root. I want to talk to
the root person and no one less.
And if they can’t give me that,
then I really don’t want them as
a client. That’s kind of my
bottom line with that. And if I
can’t talk to the source, I
don’t care to talk to anyone,
unless, or not unless, but
really it’s an also, also who
I’d like to talk to is the top
sales guy. Who sells the most?
Does he sell in the close? Does
he sell in person? How does he
make his sale? And I want him to
pitch me. I want him to sell me
as if I were a prospect. And I
will go through the same
questionnaire with him, but only
after I’ve heard his sales
pitch. Hey, I maybe shooting
myself in the foot here by
telling you this, but that’s
where some of my greatest copy
has come from. It comes directly
from their top sales person. I
try to stick it into a good
letter format, which isn’t
rocket science, but it’s not
playing with Play-Doh either.
So, in other words what I’m
saying is that top sales guy
could have done that himself. He
could have taken what he says
and put it into a letter. And
that’s sort of my expertise,
taking that, organizing his
thoughts so that it’s even
clearer. But, I’ll tape record
everything, Michael. I think
since I had the brain tumor and
I had brain surgery, I think I
probably have the worst memory
on the planet sometimes. And I
find the tape recorder; I guess
you could call it a crutch if
you want to. But I can’t live
without tape recording phone
calls and impromptus that I have
and interviews that I do. Is
that what you’re looking for
when you’re asking me how I do
it? Is that closer to what you
wanted?
Michael: Yes, exactly.
Brian: They’re really logical
questions. They’re not some
mysterious set of questions that
I ask people. I remember before
I was quote-unquote a pro, I
used to think okay well these
guys have some experienced
magical process that they go
through. And this is not true.
It’s just not true. They just
ask logical questions, basically
what they need to know to sell.
Michael: Thank you for that.
Brian: Sure. I’m here to serve
you. That’s why I’m here. So, if
you’ve got questions, please
fire away.
Jim: Brian, this is Jim
Steigerwald in Denver.
Brian: Hi.
Jim: Hi there. Brian can you
elaborate a bit more on some of
the questions you asked to
really get into their heads?
Brian: Yes, well, I don’t care
to get into the client’s head so
much. First of all I just want
to make that clarification. I
just want to know who these
people are and really all I do—I
consider myself a master of
empathy. Now, empathy is not
sympathy. But, empathy is that
you’re adaptive; is just walking
a mile in your prospect’s
moccasins. But, to get into that
mind set is really, really what
it’s about. And it takes great
compassion for people in
general, to get into the
people’s heads. You have to
care. And you have to care
enough about them. Do you see
what I’m saying? And if you
don’t, if you’re not doing
something that you’re passionate
about, or that you can be
passionate about, that’s where
my prerequisite is when somebody
wants to hire me. Is can I get
passionate about what he’s
selling. If I can’t, then I’m
sorry, this is not going to work
out.
Jim: Brian, when you write a
letter, you just wrote a 34-page
letter for Yanik. What was the
process you used there? What was
the letter for, the type of
product, and did you just talk
to Yanik about it? Did you talk
to people who were potential
buyers or people who were
already buyers or customers?
Brian: All the above and I go
through the same sorts of
questions. I want to answer your
question, what’s the process.
Really, Michael, you touched on
it. It’s not so much a matter of
research, although it is. I
don’t like to really think of it
as research. When I’m really
thinking of an ad, I want to
essentially become this person
for a period of time long enough
to get the right answers to the
right questions. Usually that
just comes. I’ll talk to past
customers. I’ll talk to people
who I consider to be potential
customers. I’ll say, what are
the five questions that you
would ask me. More than likely
if I were to sell you this
widget, if I were to sell this
course on advertising, this
course on marketing, what are
the five questions that you’re
most likely going to ask me? And
then what I do is I take those
five questions and I ask them
from different frames of
reference. For example, in LP
they talk about people being
auditory and kinesthetic and
visual and I’ll ask those five
questions 15 or 20 times as it
relates to a more touchy/feely
person, which is the kinesthetic
and then the visual person will
have five different questions.
They have five whole different
questions than the kinesthetic
guys, the touchy/feely guys, the
moody person, the moody lady,
the moody guy, the guy that’s
more sensitive, if you will.
They’ll have five different
questions about your product or
service—totally different
questions than the visual guy.
And auditory and visual guys
tend to have a mixture of the
same. But it’s really
fascinating to me to get into
that compassionate frame where I
just feel for these people. I
feel for the prospect. I really
mentally go there with it. And I
become emotionally, more so on
an emotional level than on a
logical level, but more so on an
emotionally level because in
sales 101, we don’t buy things
on logic. We justify based on
logic, but we buy based on
emotion. So, what you have to do
is emotionally mirror who your
ideal prospects are and then
from there you can start to
emotionally mirror who your less
than ideal prospect is so that
you can capture a little bit
more of the market share. I
don’t know, maybe I’m talking to
ethereal here. But that’s just
where I’m at right now. That’s
the way I do what I do.
Preston: Brian, Preston Campbell
here. Good to meet you. I love
all your material and your
courses. You’ve gone through
that mental process of getting
inside the prospect’s head. When
you sit down to write, have you
set out an outline to give you a
flow or do you sit down and kind
of feel this consciousness?
Brian: It could be deceptive for
me to answer this honestly
because what I do is not always
going to work for someone who
has only some experience at
writing copy. But, really
Preston, you right. It’s just a
flow thing for me. It’s a state
of higher consciousness is an
okay work for it. But it has to
do with the empathy level and
the compassion level that I feel
for the prospects. It maybe
something simple. It sounds
ridiculous, but how much true
compassion or how much true
empathy could you really have
for a guy you’re trying to sell
him on this money making scam,
right, and the scam may work, it
maybe legit. But, it just takes
a certain level of empathy to
really connect with him so that
he feels like wow this guy
really does care about me. This
product sounds wonderful and the
person writing the letter really
sounds like he cares. He really
does care. Look at the
guarantee. There’s proof that he
care. All my goodness, look at
all these testimonials from
people who he’s helped. Look at
them. They’re telling me how
much he cares, how much he
delivers. Now, this is a
conscious thing that runs
through a prospects mind. But
it’s like the nodding of the
head that’s going on inside
their mind; yes this looks good,
this feels right, this look
rights, it is right. Now, there
are times when I just can’t hit
that stride. There are times
when—hey I’m a single Dad. I’ve
got four kids I’m raising here
on my own and I work out of my
home office. Hey I got laundry
to do. Sometimes I just cannot
get in that zone, which is what
I like to call it. I can’t find
that space. And so, at that
point, there is a like a step
one and a step two. Step one I
write out the offer. I’m not
worried about the copy. I’m not
worried about how the words flow
at this point. What I’m doing is
I’m drawing the bull’s-eye on
the target from where I want the
copy to lead. Does that make
sense to you Preston?
Preston: Absolutely.
Brian: So, I start with what is
the offer. And really you break
that down, okay the price is
this or you can make three
payments of this, here’s what
you get, exactly for this price
you get the product, which is a
notebook, it’s three cassettes,
two computer CD’s, and four
bonuses. Here are the bonuses,
and here’s the guarantee. Those
are the elements of an offer and
here’s the time limit. That
would be another thing. Some
element of scarcity needs to be
in the offer. So, that would be
the first thing I would do,
Preston, I would sit down and I
would write, I would create the
offer. And again, I’m not
worrying about the fluidity of
the words or the conversational
qualities of the words. And at
that point, I would probably go
to headlines. And I’m a headline
fanatic. I probably have
50gigabytes of headlines;
headlines I’ve written,
headlines I’ve seen, headlines
I’ve loved on the Internet. I
copy and paste them in a Word
document. And when I write
headlines, and this is for most
common themes, One of the most
common pains is people are just
not writing enough headlines.
They maybe write 20 headlines. I
was a professional making my
living off of royalties and my
fees. I write 300, 400 headlines
for a project. Now, half of them
maybe a version of one of the
other 200. And then maybe the
last third is a combination of
the prior 300, but see it’s an
evolutionary process. And what
you’ll find is that part of
headline three went beautifully
with headline number 292 to come
up with the absolute best
possible headline. You couldn’t
have come up with it if you
didn’t push yourself to headline
to 232. You couldn’t have
possibly come up with that
headline. I’m just a fanatic
about it. You’ve just got to
write more headlines. If I see
another who else wants to, I’m
going to scream.
Caller: Brian, I have two
questions for you. The first is
on the ton of headlines, so I’d
want to know how do you know
when you’ve gotten there, when
you’ve got that headline nailed?
The second is, how long does
this process take you from
beginning to end generally?
Brian: Generally speaking the
process—I’m going to that
first—if I’m already familiar
with the prospect and in essence
my essential research is
done—see I call it basic
research, which is facts,
figures, statistics and what you
might call real research. Then
there’s the essential research,
which is getting inside the
prospect’s life and feeling
their feelings. So, if I know a
prospect, I can usually—and when
I say $24,000 for a project, I’m
not writing a postcard for you
for $24,000. I’m doing a whole
big developing toolkit of copy
for a client usually. Now, a lot
of people come to me and say I
need a letter and here you go,
fine. But, it usually takes two
weeks, to answer your question.
The process takes me two weeks
on a project. Now, I can’t work
12, 18 hours a day in the zone.
I can work 12, 18 hours a day, I
don’t. I have lifestyle issues
with that. But, I can’t stay in
the zone forever. It’s
exhausting. And if anyone on the
phone that’s done anything in
sports where you have to get in
a mental state for that, you
know what I’m talking about.
It’s exhausting and you need to
rejuvenate that psychological
capital that you’ve built up
over the years because it
becomes drained. Now, if I don’t
know a prospect, if I don’t know
who they are and I have to be a
little bit more specific with
you sir, because if it’s a
34-page letter and I don’t set
out saying, okay this is going
to be a 34-page letter. Letters
evolve. They just unfold. So, if
I’m writing—I’ll just call it a
letter for a gentleman’s
prospects whose minds I have not
been in, whose lives and
feelings I have not felt, it’ll
take me a good month. And then
the question about the
headlines, how do you know when
you’re there. I can only answer
that question for me and you
asked it to me. How do you know
Brian when you’re done? For me
it’s a very bone thing, it’s a
very ethereal feeling that I
get, a gut instinct based on
having written gazillion
headlines and having 95% of them
kick butt. It’s really just a
feeling for me. For you, how do
you know is going to be
different. But, sometimes you’ll
be giddy. You’ll get giddy.
You’ll be oh wow, look at that,
look at what I did. Now, of
course, you can get giddy and
then come back tomorrow with a
more objective posture and say
okay I got giddy over this
headline, why. And then look at
it more from a left-brain
perspective. Do you see what I’m
saying?
Caller: Yes.
Brian: When I write copy, if you
were to see some of the videos
at the Killer Copy Clinic, you
would just laugh. You would say,
oh my God, this guy’s a nut
case. I’m getting the shaving
cream and I’m spraying it on my
desk and I’m playing in it and
I’m play with Play-Doh. You
would think I’m a nut case. But,
you want to become like a little
child with this process. And
that’s the one thing I really
think is missing in Ad Magic. I
wrote Ad Magic ten years ago,
and I’ve learned and grown quite
a bit from there. But, there’s
not much child’s play in Ad
Magic. There’s not much laughter
going on and there’s not much
about the process that I teach
you that’s very funny. But, I’m
riot to be around when I’m
writing copy. Certain people get
drunk and they’re just hilarious
when they’re drunk, but when
they’re not drunk they’re just
really mean or maybe they’re not
and they’re just normal. When I
get in the zone, I just get
high. I’ve never drunk a drink
of alcohol in my life or done
any kind of drugs whatsoever,
but I can only imagine that
smoking pot or doing cocaine is
similar to the feeling that I
have. I love it. And that’s why
it’s so important for me to take
on projects that I can be
passionate about and can have
fun with. Don’t call me with a
multi-level thing. Don’t even do
it. Don’t call me with a network
marketing thing because I will
not have fun. I just can’t. I
have tried with those and I just
can’t have fun with them.
Michael: I have another
question, Brian. This is
Michael. When you pick a client,
how do you negotiate and what
kind of—I know you charge
$25,000 for the fee—but what do
you get on the backend? What
kind of agreement do you sign?
How well are you protected? Can
you describe some of that
process, any protection that
assures that you get paid and
how do you control that?
Brian: That would probably be
helpful for this group to hear
because I’m assuming you’re
writing contracts with these
based on contingency, as well.
The honest truth is $24,500 is a
starting point. And I don’t
always get that. Sometimes I get
$35,000. I’ve certainly been
paid that before. But, my honest
answer Michael is I’m way too
nice of a guy to be in business.
And over the last 15 years, I
should have made at least $1.7
million that I did not get paid
because of empty promises that I
did not get on paper. That’s the
honest answer. Really what I
need as a businessperson—I guess
I become more of the person that
I need. I do not need that
person so bad now as I used to.
Just through life experience, I
just realize that not everybody
is as nice as they like to
pretend to be. And not everybody
has the intentions that I do and
that is to keep my promises, and
keep what I say as my word is my
bond. Not everybody’s like that.
And so now I have really
thorough contracts with
everyone. I’ve really thorough
procedures that say we’re going
in with an independent auditing
service and this guy is going in
and look at your books; it’s all
confidential, and he’s going to
say here’s where this guy is at.
Now, if you want you can hire a
separate auditing service, I’m
not going to pay for it. If you
want, you can hire a separate
auditing service and see exactly
where you’re at because from
here on out, I’m going to get 5,
10, 15% of the net or the gross
or however you want to work it
out.
Michael: How do you work it out,
gross or net?
Brian: It depends on the profit
margin. If it’s an information
product, it has immense profit
margins; I have no problem
charging 5% of the gross. And
it’s negotiable, too. If someone
would rather not pay me a
royalty, then my fee goes up. If
someone would like to pay me a
royalty and they’re an
established business with an
established track record, then
I’m happy to drop the up front
fee or to cut the up front fee,
or cut it into payments, or even
to drop it. You know, cut the up
front fee, reduce the up front
fee is a better word for it and
divide it into payments, as
well. I’m very flexible when I
see a business that’s rock
solid, that’s exceeding despite
of itself. I’m very flexible
because I know I can go into
that business and I can make a
ton of money with it. I’ve got a
client right now who’s in the
stock market business. We have
an ad come in the, I think it’s
the Saturday/Sunday edition of
the Investors Business Daily
this past weekend. And I’m
getting paid on royalties on
that. I’ve been getting about
$7,000 to $12,000 a month from
him for almost a year now on the
royalty basis. And that’s
because the copy I wrote works.
That’s why I get it.
Michael: Are the royalties
ongoing until a certain time
limit?
Brian: No, I don’t put a limit
on it at all. Why limit
yourself? Again, it’s going to
depend on the circumstance. If
the gentleman or the company
only has some much profit
margin, then you may be better
off to pass on the deal even
though you know you could help
him. If he’s not willing to pay
your up front fee, but he’s
willing to give you contingency,
but that contingency is only
giving you 5% of net, and 5% of
net per month only comes to $500
or $600, or even in the
thousand, there’s just too much
work involved with it that needs
to be done. And I’m talking from
your point of view. In my
estimation, and I’m speaking
about the marketing, I’m not
speaking about the pricing
problems that you deal with,
with your clients. Strictly
speaking from a marketing point
of view, the biggest challenge
you’re going to run into is
getting people off their duffs
and doing what you teach them to
do. In fact, I would be willing
to bet that if you don’t place
the ad for them, if you don’t
lick the envelopes, put the
stamps on and press the thing
yourself, 90% of the people will
do nothing with your time.
That’s a pretty strong statement
to make. I’m just saying it
because I’ve been in your shoes.
I have done what you’re doing
and you have to be prepared for
it. People are lazy. They’re
just flat out lazy. And I cannot
tell you how many times people
have paid me in the past $7,500
for a letter and they never
mailed the doggoned thing. I
cannot tell you how many times.
It’s more than you would ever
believe. In fact, the number is
probably nine of ten, now this
is in the past couple of years
after I got over my wife leaving
me; my life is back is what I’m
saying. Over the last two years,
I’ve gotten my life back. That
hasn’t been the case. But before
that, that’s been the case, nine
of ten people would pay me good
money. I deposited it. I spent
it. It must have been good
money. They never mailed it,
they never ran the ad, and they
never put it on the Web. Go
figure that one out.
Martin: Brian, we have about
five minutes left. We may get
cut off, so I just wanted to
warn you.
Brian: I can keep going all
night if you guys want to.
Preston: Brian, Preston Campbell
again.
Brian: Okay, Preston.
Preston: You can tell I’m kind
of a process guy. You’ve gone
through and after you’ve gotten
in a client’s head, and you sat
down and you wrote your
offering, your headlines and you
create your copy. How much of
this process is rewrite and
editing versus kind of going
through that first time?
Brian: Well, for me it’s pretty
cut and dry. I’m constantly
reading out loud and my children
think I’ve gone insane because
I’m always in here talking to
myself. But, I’m reading it out
loud. And I harp on this in my
course and I know that very few
people do it just from reading
the copy that’s out there.
Reading it out loud is your
editing. It is your processing.
There are so many advantages to
reading things out loud that I
couldn’t possibly enumerate them
all. And they have to do with
left-brain, right-brain
processes. And they have to do
with editing. They have to do
with grammar check. There are so
many advantages; it’s wonderful.
And for me, it’s kind of an all
at once process. Now I will say
this, when I’m in the zone,
there is no editing. It’s like
brainstorming 101. But it also
applies to getting in the
copywriting zone and writing. I
just go 90 miles an hour and I
don’t edit myself whatsoever.
And I may start a new paragraph
and I may start that paragraph
with a new idea. And then I’ll
actually write a new idea on the
computer. And then I start
flowing into that. But, there’s
no editing during the creativity
part. It just flows and goes and
goes. Sometimes I’ll go for 20,
30 pages and then the next day
when I’m climbing back into that
left-brain, I’m like oh my gosh,
what have I created. I’ve got 30
pages to go through, to filter
out. It could be a process.
Preston: Brian, you’ve got an
awesome zone.
Brian: Well, you’ve got to go
check out my website. It’s how
to get in the mind of me. That’s
what that website’s all about,
getting inside the mind of Brian
Keith Voiles. I don’t care if
you become a member or not—but
if you do, I’ll give you guys
all half off. Let me just say it
that way. There’s a promotion
code area on the order form and
just type in Martin in
lowercase. I’ll go set that up
right now and I’ll give you half
off. I’m not here to sell you.
I’m just saying that’s what that
website’s about. If that’s what
you’re interested in, getting
inside the mind of a top
copywriter, I think it’s a
worthy cause; you might want to
check it out. I love what I’m
doing and I wish I could
multiply myself and have five or
six of me doing it so I can make
even more money.
Martin: Well Brian, thank you
very much. Let me just tell you,
you can’t get any better than
Brian.
Brian: Like I said, I’d go all
night if you want to.
Martin: Well, we’re going to get
cut off here in just a couple of
minutes. But, I just want you to
know, Brian, we really do
appreciate. I think you can see
how humble Brian. He’s just the
nicest guy you’d every meet,
like a big Teddy Bear. I love
the guy to death. We just
appreciate everything you’ve
done for us Brian. Anything else
we need to discuss before we get
cut off here guys? Anything at
all you want to talk about or
need help with? Marie sent over
an excellent piece that she had
created this morning for some
critique. I worked on that and
got it back to here. Did you get
that Marie?
Marie: Yes, I did.
Martin: Great. Got that back to
her. Stan sent a couple of
things on over and I worked on
those and I got them back to
him. Greg Walter’s still looking
for a date, so if anybody could
help him. It’s tough job, but
we’ve got our feelers out for
you.
Preston: Greg I think you should
hire Keith to write you a sales
letter.
Marie: That might work, but you
know you’ll flub it up.
Martin: The problem is as good
as Brian is; he’s no miracle
worker. Hey guys, really, thanks
so much for being on. We’ve got
another one in two weeks.
Another conference is coming up,
another workshop. We’re almost
sold out on that. Things are
moving along very well. We had a
great workshop this last time.
We had 12 people go through and
it’s just an excellent group. We
sure appreciate everybody and
their efforts. Listen, if
there’s anything that you need,
please you know how to get a
hold of us. We’re dedicated to
your success. We want you to be
successful. We’ll do whatever it
takes to help you get there. So,
please use us and let us know
how we can help. So, thanks very
much and from that we’re going
to get cut off here in just
about a minute.
Michael: Thank you Martin. Thank
you Brian.
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